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If I Had to Paint My Aura this day

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If I Had to Paint My Aura this day

If I had to paint my aura this day.....

   I'd paint it with a worried brow

   crushed with marked questions.  

   Defeat would battle, que sera, sera

   with many bold slashes in helter skelter fashion.

   Within the field of greys background acceptance

   you'd find a face compressed on the canvas

   and on its cheeks, still, a tinge of iridescence sun

   the journey of the day just begun

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As this day comes to an ending

  I'd paint it now with bruised puff shadows,

  from each--- blue teardrops flowing.

  A drooping lilly in a field of red roses. 

  Dejected, torn and faded patches

  on a pair of well worn jeans

  all these in a starless purple sky


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  1. Date: 7/9/2012 2:06:00 PM

    Fine images here! I liked the lind about the "iridescence sun" the most. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:57:00 PM

    I really like this, from the worried brow to the drooping lilly and so forth! the sadness and anger and bruised person really come through with your unique imagery! fav :)

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 5:06:00 PM

    I don't know what's in the water down there, but it's multicolored and exquisite.

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 12:02:00 AM

    Thank you for your thoughtful comments! God bless you and thanks for the blessing you are to fellow soupers! JP

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 9:32:00 PM

    wow, what excellent imagery. Love this!! Btw, the words they say are que sera sera except I don't know how to put accents over the sera part!!

    Squyres Avatar Debra Squyres Date: 5/28/2012 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea...I had looked it up..perhaps what I found was the English translation...will look further and try to make it right....Thank you for your critique !!!
  1. Date: 5/27/2012 11:12:00 AM

    wow

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 11:01:00 AM

    this comes off so naturally like cloud is to rain, debra... grreat flow with hues painted on your word canvas... : huggs!

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 1:22:00 PM

    Wonder what color mine aura is.....very well written Debra. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 5:59:00 AM

    You made it so visual we can see it ,what a great aura it would be Debra.love it !!!Anne