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Just pages of U

Shaz Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Just pages of U

Pages been inked
Reflection of time
Memories one can rewind
Moments been and gone
Words still ring true
Emotions connected
Its a picture of you
These were ugly times
Unpleasant and few
My only saviour
Just pages of you
It had to be this way
You were always closed
Eyes - mouth - ears 
And your feelings blank
You present me a wall
With no face and no heart
What was i to do
But make a new start

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  1. Date: 5/26/2012 12:39:00 AM
    wow, so sad, but I love how you made this unfeeling person a "closed" book, excellent metaphor!

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 5/26/2012 1:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea - definitely a closed book! But I love that my experiences feed my writing :)
  1. Date: 5/25/2012 11:07:00 AM
    'pages of you'...I love that!

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 5/26/2012 1:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Caleb very much! thanks for helping me find Poetry Soup :) - Shaz
  1. Date: 5/25/2012 9:49:00 AM
    I agree with Prince as well those first few lines reeled me in deeply!! enjoyed as always.

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 5/26/2012 1:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Thanks Pace :) I love that you are an avid reader of what i write mwah - Shaz
  1. Date: 5/25/2012 6:40:00 AM
    Very lovely.....the first few lines where captivating...

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 5/25/2012 7:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Prince..... :)