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In dreams

In dreams i kiss destiny full on 
the lips
I hold her close as I gazed in 
her star lit eyes
She murmurs sofly before she 
lifts her hand
Her touch visits my face finally, 
my heart races
Then she fades into the 
whiteness reaching her palms 
out for me.

To be continued...
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  1. Date: 6/16/2012 9:38:00 AM

    ..."There Is A Lot Of Precious Beauty Amid Your Comments Box Below, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Ronnie * This Is Such A Beautiful Poem ... Whom Can Deny Destiny ? Thank You Also, For Your Lovely & Beautiful Visit ... 'My Luv to You,'" Tristen :)

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 7:28:00 PM

    HI RONNY,,, CONGRATS IN BRIAN'S CONTEST... XOX~PD

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 2:43:00 PM

    I LOVE this, Ronny. Wow!!! And congratulations. FAVE

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 1:34:00 PM

    Congrats Ronny on your win hugs vie

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 2:18:00 PM

    A fine beginning! Congrad's on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 1:55:00 PM

    Ronny congrats on yoru win..David

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 5:39:00 AM

    Congrats Ronny on a fantastic win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 12:15:00 PM

    cheers to you for the grreat win,ronny.. this is fabulous!. congrats and huggs!

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the #180 contest Ronny. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:10:00 AM

    Wonderful imagery... Congrats on your win... Terry

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 6:37:00 PM

    I see the fantastic viision too Ronnie; love those laswt 3 lines as they are so visual! A real beuty you wrote. Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 10:27:00 AM

    Good work on an interesting topic..I hope that destiny holds many good things for you..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Thanks for letting me know that you entered my contest..I appreciate you participating in it..I am feeling better today..Sara

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 9:14:00 AM

    ....ill be waiting for your addition to this fantastic write dear poet ! Awesome ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 2:33:00 AM

    Awesome moment captured here, what can be zapped in an instant!

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 12:25:00 PM

    part 2,waiting

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 9:40:00 AM

    So far a wonderful write and looking forward to the next part. phyl

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 4:02:00 AM

    Wow Ronny........such sensitivity and u had me wanting to read more......glad u have more to add to the journey of this wonderful poem....Shaz

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 2:20:00 AM

    tenderly woven, ronny.. looking forward to the final lines...:) huggs!