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Waves

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Waves

Love is as deep as the ocean Unpridictable like it's waves sometimes calm and Unscathed..Sometimes cold the deeper you go in..... But beautiful when you reach the bottom things unseen......Feelings no longer lie untouched things slow down nothing rushed..... You want to hold on and never let go... United together mind body and soul.... A bond that no one can ever break..... I wait by the shore and pray for the day that  one of those waves sweeps me away

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  1. Date: 5/24/2012 3:05:00 PM
    What a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it with us.

    Castro Avatar Carmen Castro
    Date: 5/24/2012 4:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad you enjoyed it
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 2:57:00 PM
    Romantic and sweet love poem Carmen, love it....well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Castro Avatar Carmen Castro
    Date: 5/24/2012 4:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you enjoyed reading it : )