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Death

When you died I stopped living 
No comfort to be given 
No reason to continue living 
I miss you more everyday 
Can't believe God took you away 
A pain that goes so deep 
It pierced right through my soul 
Death left a darkened hole 
If tears could bring you back I swear we would never part 
I  would have brought you back and healed my broken heart 
They say God takes the roses and never takes the thorns 
I wished you pricked his finger and told him he was wrong 
I hate to feel this way and long to meet my fate  
Death  no longer my biggest fear 
 I only fear dying and still not having you near

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  1. Date: 7/20/2012 6:11:00 PM

    Death is purely the unknown, we wont know until we experience it. You should have every reason to continuing living with love in your soul

    Castro Avatar Carmen Castro Date: 7/20/2012 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I do to some extent ... The writing helps : )