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apoorva patrikar

Date: 10/11/2012 9:48:00 AM

great ines

Date: 6/2/2012 2:05:00 PM

no new posts? ur slacking, lol :) and where's that new avatar? thanks for your comments on my work -btw, i don't like long poems in general - i believe in the economy of words - saying what you want in as little words as possible. i'm not one to wax on...just not my style

Nathan A. Date: 6/6/2012 12:45:00 PM

i am slacking always its what i am good at also i am having trouble moving picture from to computer so i can crop it and update it will fix it when i stop slacking

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/31/2012 9:01:00 AM

Wow a powerful poem you have penned Nathan. Hugs Phyl

DON JOHNSON

Date: 5/30/2012 5:38:00 PM

powerful images here mate

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 5/28/2012 5:07:00 PM

why even spare the child? if there's no hope? if their soul will only become tainted anyway? i guess it's honorable not to kill the innocent... until they become that way. but by not killing them, arent' you tainting them with the knowledge? the leftover violence? go to sleep, as if they could! good one nathan :)

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Date: 5/24/2012 8:06:00 PM

Had to read this one again..love it!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/24/2012 8:00:00 PM

Nathan, my sweet love.. First of all we will never understand Why God does any of the things he does. No one will understand the importance of our way. Only "HE"~ know's! You know the one that holds the knife to our throats. Like a shadow, all we can do, is ask, if he really is there and if he really cares? We asked for it. It's called life! And all of it's expenses! It's like when you ask for booze, U will never know what's at the bottom waiting for U! Everything about life comes with horror, only cause we will never understand, what protection really means. Why must we always look for protection, without knowing the true way. You know the way of God, he takes it all... Don't you think? I have wondered many times, why my family and not me... Oh! Well, i will not ponder on it no more.. There is no answer "TILL YOUR DEAD" ... great poem..xox~ .enjoyed stopping by tonight~ take care :-) PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/24/2012 5:13:00 PM

This one has a very surprising end..Good work when it leaves one wondering ...Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent at my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2012 3:56:00 PM

ooohhhh, a serial killer poem!!!! I could see this made into a movie: the Killer poet? (as opposed to poet destroyer. heehee) I enjoyed this.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/24/2012 7:44:00 PM

ha ha ..funny Andrea... as a matter of fact He's talking about God.. ask me how i know... I dare you? ja ja ja ja

Chris D. Aechtner

Date: 5/24/2012 12:21:00 PM

Nathan, I am impressed.

Arild Andresen Ertsland

Date: 5/24/2012 11:43:00 AM

Raw and strong poetry,nathan..Arild

Richard Palmer

Date: 5/24/2012 10:38:00 AM

thanks

David Williams

Date: 5/24/2012 10:35:00 AM

the poor little thing is not so little or poor..David

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Date: 5/24/2012 10:22:00 AM

Oh Wow, this is a spectacular write here Nathan...Love this piece to the fullest!!!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/24/2012 9:40:00 AM

Better to be innocent. How true. Evil always wins if we dwell on pain.

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2012 9:36:00 AM

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