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A Magic Adventure Of Peter The Pan--part II

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A Magic Adventure Of Peter The Pan--part II

Inside the Dishwasher everyone rushed!
Clinks, clanks, rattles, 'Ouches' and ' Ohs'!
"Would you pa--lease, settle down!" said Deb--They hushed.
"Now we can hear...let's just see how this goes."

Curious, Peter, looked out through a chinc,
And watched Vie and Chris-- approaching by twos.
They opened the door--and who do you think--
Standing there wearing her fine Jimmy Choos,
Ms Lost Sonnet!--spoke not a word--but winked.

Wilma Wine-Corkscrew, dressed in purple hues
Gave the 'all clear', and Peter spread the news.

"We're having a party Ms Sonnet, please,
Won't you join us? It's a magic party
For Peter", said Ruben Rotisserie.
Bob Blender poured her a drink--quite hardy.

Connie Candellabra was flaming bright
As Ms Sonnet swept past to the soft couch.
Carolyn Cookie Jar screamed with such fright,
"Quick! She's on fire!" Then Lost cried, "Ouch!"

"I'll save her", said Catie Collander. "Here!"
But the water leaked through her like a sieve.
Susan Spatula yelled, "Have no fear, dear!"
Yet, the fire held on and would not give--

Others tried, but could not stop the fire.
Then Peter said, "I wuw twy! I can do it!
With 'Awwy, I can fwy! Way up highya!
Togethwa, we can save Ms Wost Sonnet!

Awwy is my fwend. He tawks funny, too!
He's aw the way fwom Engwand and he is
My Supwa Cape! So I can fwy! It's twue!
No H's wive theaw--his name is wike this:
'Awwy--not Hawwy." So now, they all knew.

"Did I 'ear some bloke colling my name?"
"Yes! 'Awwy, me! We've Ms Sonnet to save!"
Harry Handtowel--AKA, Super Cape--fame
Was now on the neck of Peter the Brave!

With no hesitation quickly they flew,
Smothered the fire and saved just one shoe.
Brittle and weak, Lost needed more than glue...
"She needs magic! Oh! Paweeze! What can we do?"

"Peter...we only made enough for you".
Said Carol Crock-pot. They all cried, "Boo Hoo..."
"Then give huw my magic! That's what you do!"
So quickly they sprinkled the magic brew.
Ms Sonnet was greatful--then said, "Adieu".

"Peter, you've done well," said Anne Assam Tea,
"Let's all have a cup'a tea and you'll see...
"'Magic's believing in yourself, --frankly,
Do that--and you can do--anything!"

~©deborah burch
5/23/2012

*Special appearance by "Lost Sonnet", courtesey of David Williams...with much gratitude, thank you all for appearing ;)...Peter has many adventures to come...big hugs, love you all, cap'n deb

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  1. Date: 7/15/2012 11:08:00 PM
    Cap'n Deb, dropping by to thank you for your support and encouragement. It didn't go unnoticed. Don't ever lose yourself.

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 1:44:00 AM
    I'll never see my kitchen the same way again, now i know all my pots and pans talk about me, when my back is turned, i could see this on a.m t.v, this is so good. in facy it is brilliant. harry

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 2:49:00 PM
    Overwhelming this collection of philosophical pots, pans and other utensils. You've outdone Dickens, himself, in bringing the inanimate to life. VERY impressive! Love, daver

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/26/2012 6:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OH MY!! Daver! I am speechless! thank you for the mor than kind honour...I will cherrish the thought ;) oh to even come close to Dickens would be... magic ;)...big hug, love ya, deb
  1. Date: 5/25/2012 10:45:00 AM
    WOW,STUPENDOUS WRITE DARLING!!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/26/2012 5:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...thank you dear Elliot! :)) your character didnt play a part in this episode, but he exists!! ;) love ya, deb
  1. Date: 5/25/2012 1:32:00 AM
    Skills on display. I have to hide your pens.. I bet you laughed all the way through the write. I did for the clever mind you have......WHAT IT DO, BOO...jus some hood talk lol

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/26/2012 5:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    btw...you are in the list of characters, too. you're supposed to be the mop who has more adventures in other episodes!!;)
    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/26/2012 5:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL! ! Come on if ya think ya can ;) LOL love ya Boo! your encouragement always touches my heart :)
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 4:07:00 PM
    This is great work and thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/26/2012 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks so very much Lucilla:)
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 10:57:00 AM
    see Debbie bouncing in her chair! we could combime my chairs doing musical chairs with yours pots & pans..we should look for others to join up! I could illustrate!! [course those dern publishers what to complie & pick themselves grrrrrr] a+ 7 and which one do you want me to fav? Light & Love

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/24/2012 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol, Debbie Dishwasheaw, you may fav eithewa! Wooben fav'd both!! lol wuve you, Peta the bwave! ;)
    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/24/2012 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LoL!!! Highness!!!*curtsey* I was beginning to think only the guys liked it :0 ;) I amm so glad you like it...does this mean I missed out on a #1 in the contest, ;) ha ha! that may be one for Joe's "I just cant win!!" LOL! I'm going to start on the sketches this weekend If we lived closer we could tweek sketch ideas! ! Another adventure is in the works...email me thoughts ..sounds like an adventure! !!;) love ya bunches! deb
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 10:52:00 AM
    awesome ,

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/24/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you nathan:) don't lose heart, Peter is having another adventure with more characters...sure to bear your name ;) huggs, love ya deb
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 6:37:00 AM
    ... A wonderful favourite, because its just sooo sweeet :)

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 6:29:00 AM
    ... Ahweeee, tis this beautiful reflection of a creative and lovely lady, with the imagination and the heart of a precious child ... Made me think of my older brothers only child and son when he was five or six years old and would wrap a cape about his beautiful little shoulders and fly fly fly ... Thank you, beautiful Deborah, for stopping back by and blessing me with your treasures kind visit ... Stay beautiful, love, tristen :)

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/24/2012 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much tristen. i am greatly honoured...hugs, love ya deb
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 2:02:00 AM
    me wike vewy much..ha ha ha ha ha..super congrats on this very slendid piece of work.. roll on the episode..David xxx

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/24/2012 3:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :D thank you sooo vewwy much!! I am touched and deepwy honouwed!!! ;) love ya, cap'n deb Oh, I think Ms Sonnet may be heading to Fwance!!! ;)
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 10:28:00 PM
    "My Supwa Cape! So I can fwy! It's twue! No H's wive theaw--his name is wike this: 'Awwy--not Hawwy." So now, they all knew." HA!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/23/2012 10:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :D thank you Chris...yes Peter will be having more adve ntures...I hope to start some sketches this weekend...love ya, deb
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 10:27:00 PM
    Love it! Definitely quirky enough for my tastes, that for sure. Yeah, you should continue with more adventures for Peter.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/23/2012 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Chris! I was hoping you would like it and find it funny ...somehow Ruben's comment came up under yours :0...thank you for playing part and being so brave in the story ;) big hugs, love ya, deb
    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/23/2012 10:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...:)) I'm sooo glad you enjoyed it, Ruben. Thank you so much for your encouragement! :D yeah, it just seemed to flow off the tongue,(your names) lol. thank you soooo much...it means a great deal to me...:) big hug, love ya, deb
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 9:58:00 PM
    Deb, thank you so much,, and about your soup mail... oooo..I'm all ears... anyways~ the first part made this whole story so far..awesome...... thank you for sharing... good night..pd

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/23/2012 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    big hugs 'Tex'--PD ;) lol love you bunches ..thanks for everything! deb
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 9:41:00 PM
    Waaaaaaaaaa HAHHAHAHAHA! Ruben Rotisserie!! : ) This is crazily amazing! I love-love it! You must write short tales for kids, Deborah! Both parts are going to my FAVs! Amusing work! Ruben.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/23/2012 10:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wooben...wook up in Chwis's spot fowa youw wepwy!!! ;) lol, love ya deb