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Summer Butterflies

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Summer Butterflies


blue winged canopy
of a thousand butterflies
can not compare to
the fluttering of my heart
when your eyes and mine are one

deborah burch©
5/21/2012 


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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 12:33:00 PM

    For sure worthy of a first placement, Deborah. Congratulations on your fine win. By the by, I love your happy pic. :)

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:58:00 AM

    An awesome write deserved a win. Congrats on the top place.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:26:00 PM

    Deb, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 12:58:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Deb...

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:51:00 AM

    Love the butterfly point of reference. Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 6:04:00 AM

    I see why she loved this...ITS AWESOME!! You won a contest that EVERYBODY wanted to win! Great job, Deborah! Now its going to my fav list.

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 6:23:00 PM

    This is charming love at its best. J

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 5:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on your clever tanka. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 12:25:00 PM

    An amazing poem with a very wonderful image! I love it so much and I've enjoyed reading it as well. Thanks for sharing and my big congratulations on your well-deserved grand win my dear friend Deborah. Have a great day! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:44:00 AM

    Hi Debs many congratulations on your double win , first as a fave and now this xx

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 5:03:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Lets Pass A Tanka Love Note" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 8:47:00 PM

    Congrats Deb on your win! Such a beautiful image!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 7:23:00 AM

    congrats on your win Deb..

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:06:00 AM

    Smoothly flowing Tanka, Congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 2:17:00 AM

    Cap'n Deb, congrats on your win, whoo-hoo...David

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:17:00 PM

    Oh what a lucky man he was. Congratulations on your tanka win.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:03:00 PM

    YOu GO GIRL. You got on the winner circle just as you deserved. This one is so charming. Congrats!

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 6:30:00 PM

    Dang, this is awesome, Debs....What an idea to combine all those gorgeous butterflies to create something incomparable to your love. Great job. :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 5:24:00 PM

    Beautiful Deb!!!!!~Lovely~Congrats to you!!!!

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 12:39:00 AM

    the depth of affection is beautifully revealed .unique ,thrilling, memorable and nice .thank you for sharing .jk

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 8:01:00 PM

    Oh I get it now! Cyndi is right. Your tanka is incredible, so romantic! I love both of your poems. You were definitely up for the challenge!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/26/2012 8:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol oh Rhonda, you are such a dear. Thank you.. love you...you are awsome!!!!
  1. Date: 5/25/2012 8:56:00 PM

    Faaaaaaaaantastic. Loved this so much I want to know what you would do with moonlit pond. (Cyndi ducks as a book is tossed at her head) Well, you could give it a go, anyways. (Cyndi dives for the couch, crawls for cover). What's one more poem, huh? (Cyndi winks and blows as kiss) This will place high. Ignore me, I just loved this so much that I actually wondered, "Holy, man, what would she have done with the other choice? Inquiring minds need to know!" LOL. Hope your well, I'm about to hit hay.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/26/2012 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL!!! ALRIGHTY THEN!! :) thank you so much for the encouragement and the fun and the challenge!! lol...i've been up all night keeping one eye peeled for that dang snake!! we ran into each other in the kitchen last night. dont know who scared who the most! LOL
    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/26/2012 5:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 5:42:00 PM

    so GOOD [no need for the final period Deb] Light & love

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/26/2012 5:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *curtsey* thank you!!!:) and thanks gor that info too that helps me so much...love you bunches, deb
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 4:18:00 PM

    wowie!!!! This is so fantastic. FAVE

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/26/2012 5:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh Andrea! I am so honoured girl! thank you...love ya, much, deb
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 11:55:00 AM

    A lot of fluttering going on in this sweet verse. Seems to capture the moment so well! :)

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/26/2012 5:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks elizabeth:)
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 10:09:00 AM

    One favorites poem Deborah....lovely and sweet....With love in the poem and in your eyes. - oxox love Anne-Lise (Luck in contest!)

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/26/2012 5:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne Lise, you are such a doll!!! thank you!!! love you bunches, deb
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 4:43:00 AM

    nice flow to this one..

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/26/2012 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Joe! :)
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 2:04:00 AM

    Cap'n Deb that's what all the girls say..David

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/26/2012 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL...too funny!! ;)
  1. Date: 5/22/2012 9:29:00 PM

    This is a beautiful, quite the beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed your lines, "of a thousand butterflies" and how it compares to, "the fluttering of my heart" very nice alignment you have created there! Your poem is full of compassion and love...you have brought them into my heart once again! I just love your write immensely Debbie! Great work!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/22/2012 9:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    that's supposed to be "big" .this dang Droid:0....lol
    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/22/2012 9:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh, sweet Russell, thank you..no kinder nor more touching words could have been spoken...thank you :) nig hug, love ya deb