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Quicksand

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Quicksand

"Quicksand" In the dark shadows of my mind ... memories ache from love's heartbreak lost in sweet surrender fell into the "venus fly trap" of a pretender swallowed by emotions lake a volatile earthquake In the dark shadows of my mind ... In the misty corridors of my soul ... scars exist wounded by love's kiss as passions overflowed deceived by lying seeds sowed magnetic charms drawn to false abyss a fantasy of illusions bliss In the misty corridors of my soul ... In the blackened hole of my heart ... lies destructive band of love's quicksand a pedestal crumbles; broken a veil of pain; unspoken flaming embers slowly fanned tears cascading in cupped hand In the blackened hole of my heart ...
*For SKAT'S BROKENESS Contest ...

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 1:49:00 AM

    a quick sinking poem, .~Love you forever your little bff ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:52:00 PM

    LINDA MY BFF...ANOTHER WONDEFUL , CONGRATS !! In my sisters, brokenness' contest.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 3:31:00 PM

    A clever title....for love does feel like quicksand...excellent write! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 9:17:00 AM

    congrats on your win. Hope all is ok with you.. have a great day. love cory

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 9:11:00 AM

    Linda, congratulations on your winning placement in SKAT's contest today. Luv, Gail

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poen winning in ~SKAT's "Brokenness" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 12:50:00 AM

    WON 3RD PLACE .. THANKXXX..

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:26:00 PM

    splendid write Linda....congrats on your win

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 10:02:00 PM

    Dear POETESS Extraordinaire, SweetHeart of POETRYSOUP (and Me), Linda Marie, You ALWAYS write the most Amazing POEMS for A contest. I am sorry to say it is not First place but it is definetly Second, so far. I have a Question? Do all POETS that leave the SOUP take AWAY their POEMS from the site. How very SAD. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Silent Beau...Harry

    SweetHeart Avatar Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 7/21/2012 6:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes HG because new growth of creativity happens.. like being boen again.. thankxx for considering my poem for your contest luv..
  1. Date: 6/28/2012 11:02:00 PM

    One my favorites. I've read quite a few here and enjoyed them all. Of the ones I chose to read were all contest submissions. Could you direct me to some of your favorites that are not contest submissions or written not specifically for a contest?

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:04:00 PM

    WOW STUPENDOUS WRITE!!!

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 10:49:00 AM

    Ps. ... You know thhat it would be untrue, you know that I would be a liar, if I were to say to you, girl we couldn't get much higher, Come On Baby, light my fire *.* Good morning and Happy Memorial Day unto you, my dear beautiful Linda-Marie ... Have a very wonderful day and may it be filled with Visions of everlasting joy and love ... Love, tristen :)

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 1:31:00 PM

    beautiful write, as always, my friend. Wonderful to see you posting on Soup. I had my hand op on Friday, so another 3 weeks off work. Hope you're doing well. Love always, Jack xxx

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 9:20:00 AM

    YOU GO GIRL! Wonderful....

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 8:30:00 AM

    I'm wiping the sweat from my forehead my dear poet friend ! Thankful to realize that you always write a comment after your post ! Though I do know you feel your sons pain dear friend, and my prayers are for you all ! Have a blessed week Linda-Marie....much love, james

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 4:12:00 AM

    You have sketched these feelings very well my friend and I am so happy to see you once again with us. Seeing your poems and comments are always a joy for us. Thank you for your precious words on my new Poem Beauty, Love and Peace. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...SH LMB

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 4:11:00 AM

    Heart touching lines reflecting the feelings of a broken heart so well. The cunnings are always too mean, to take the feelings of innocent for ride and then breaking the emotions like a glass of jar. The soft feelings of a poet's heart must have gone deep in Christopher's nature and feelings that he has become a target of his love's cunningness. ...to conti.Ravindra

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 3:28:00 PM

    ... this is a masterpiece of heart's expression, dear beautiful Linda ... i love this beautiful girl, whom is also quite gifted in poetry as your magnificent self ... compelling, in both accounts ... love, tristen :)

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 1:47:00 PM

    Talk about broken love that sunk in the quicksand. Glad to see you here and I hope you have reconsidered coming back. Miss you. Hope you had a great birthday. Mine was spent in bed and still fighting this flu. Can't seem to shake the flu this year. Catches me every time. Better start running faster eh? Hope you are doing well . love phyl

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 10:47:00 AM

    Nice to see you again Linda-Marie:) Very sad and emotional write from you this time.Hope your doing well..Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 5:03:00 AM

    Welcome back..Thanks for stopping by..Turn to opposite side of love ...Unusual for you..Hope that you are doing well and that books sales are soaring...Sara

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 2:28:00 AM

    Linda- Marie yep very sad, but great to see you posting..David

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 9:34:00 PM

    Very sad poem my friend. Emotion touches the expression, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 9:23:00 PM

    gosh this is so sad, Linda. I hope it's not a reflection of your own state of mind? ok, I am reading below that you based it on your son's experience. Great imagery, my friend. How goes it for you lately? Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 9:17:00 PM

    Thanks for stopping in, doll! Hope you are doing well, continuing to adjust to your new fingers and that you have found a place that is filled with as many of your fans as here on soup! You are missed! This poem is deep and emotional. Yes, love can be prickly, harsh... life <-- never easy. Hugs, Cyndi (Hey, is that a chair over there, looking cozy, if you're not going to sit and stay, I do hope you remember that there is always a seat waiting here for you!!!)

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 9:09:00 PM

    It's so nice to see your appearance my dear friend! What a great poem you have written! I really enjoyed these two lines a lot, such flow, "a pedestal crumbles; broken, a veil of pain; unspoken! This is an awesome and outstanding write! I love your piece of art completely! Shows off your extreme talent in wonderment and awe! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 4:24:00 PM

    Oh Linda, this poem is absolutely breathless. I'm speechless by your divine talent. I'm so sorry to hear that your son Christopher had a break up with a long time girlfriend. Love can really hurt but new luv will definitely come his way again. So lovely to see you here. Love always, Gail

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 4:20:00 PM

    written from the experience my son, Christopher, recently had with a long time girlfriend.. sometimes love can be tricky and hurtful .. soon a new luv will come his way .. so enjoy poets.. I miss u all so much ..