Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

The Cross Over

Poet Destroyer A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A  - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The Cross Over which was written by poet Poet Destroyer A . Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Poet Destroyer A

Best Poet Destroyer A Poems

+ Fav Poet

The Cross Over

My Dog 


Today is the day!
I give my dog away!
I wonder if he's sick or if he's too lazy to play and do tricks.
I called the vet, “$80 I cannot pay.”

My dog, my favorite pet,
He does not want to chase the cat.
I understand that he does not like to get wet.
But, how come today, he doesn't want to play fetch.
I tell him to roll over.
That he doesn't even want to do :- ( 
When I call my dog Rover,
He gives me the puppy face too.
Maybe he's over fed.
All he does is lay there in bed.
He’s not even wagging his tail!

My dog, my favorite pet,
He didn’t walk with me to get the mail.

Should I call the Dog Catcher?
And ask why my dog is playing dead?


by;pd & son 


Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
Next>|Last
 
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 11:00:00 AM

    This is a really nice poem about your dog. We can get real attatched to our pets. I had four puppies in my life. The two were killed. The third one died. i took him to the vet, the next day he was dead. The fourth I gave to the SPCA. Now I don't want no more. If God wants him to live, he will. Lucy

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 3:50:00 AM

    lovely and wonderful dramatic verse.

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 7:03:00 PM

    When i was young i lost my favorite companion, i cried for weeks, sniff, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 7:55:00 AM

    this is wonderful PD, i read here, within your poem, a different aspect, i read about people. maybe i'm just being supid!! anyhow love the poem...

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 9:17:00 PM

    wonderful poem my dear friend but I can feel the pain......losing the one we love is really excruciating.... thank you so much for sharing this one and for teaching me the best and easy technique/way to pronounce the long word has revived my smile. hugs :) leonora

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:22:00 PM

    what a pain. Why don't you just go inside your blog and make a comment that in the morning, when you have a lot more "answers" that you will post a new blog about it with the updated list.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 8:27:00 PM

    Poems about our pets are some of the ones that I seek out more than others...nice to revisit this one again...tell me something, PD...which of your poems on your list is your very favorite...and your least fav?..just curious...Hope that u are catching up on some rest...I've noticed you haven't been writing as much...we are prob in the same boat...luv to ya PD! gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 12:39:00 AM

    Poor doggy i hope he is doing well.. great write too!

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 8:44:00 AM

    Great collab with your son PD!!!!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 10:17:00 PM

    wow I also have a poem yet to post here called Crossing Over about my Mom's death.. we sure do think along same lines bff's do.. luv to all your family too luv.. we are at beach having fun.. Ron is sleeping so I am computering..haha.. hope baby is doing well and beautiful as ever luv.. see u soon.. bff.. great blog tonite...

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 2:46:00 PM

    Watching and waiting for God to arrive. You wonder sometimes if your even alive. The paper get's thrown and you don't touch your bone. Your master just looks at you there all alone. I'm worth 80 bucks, but if you aint' got it. Shucks.

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 8:14:00 PM

    Hope your dog is feeling better. This is such a positive and loving activity for you and your son to share. Thanks for your invitation to enter your contest! - Gail

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 1:38:00 AM

    OHHH. Probably it is better for your favorite pet to RIP rather than suffer everyday. You know the best PD. Dalila

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 9:05:00 PM

    This is great workmanship, hope the dog is feeling better luv vie

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:28:00 PM

    Awwww..a mom son collab! Now this makes my whole day!! There had to be lots of giggling as you 2 wrote this one...I can just see it now! Enjoyed the unsmiley face, all the questions thru out to pull the audience in, and the light rhyming...This is great, PD!! Been under the weather past several days. Only on here for short lil blips..I wondered how your Memorial Day weekend went. Hope your whole family was together! Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:35:00 PM

    You write very well together - lovely but so sad, though!

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 9:53:00 AM

    great poem,,,for a colab,i just want to say awwwwwwwwwww!!!!

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 10:25:00 PM

    soupmail again

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 8:08:00 AM

    Ohhhhhhhhh! tearfully, Kathy

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 5:52:00 PM

    awww...so sad :(

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 7:09:00 AM

    very cool poem in lots of ways including the sharing of it with a special writer as well as the readers. Niiicccce PD thanks for your comments. Am in the middle of moving so not on soup much. God bless

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 8:05:00 PM

    i will be the hardest thing in the world to do but you know that i know how hard it is. letting go.i can tell you what the doctor will say. you don't want to know. but in the end the question is are you willing to let him go so that his suffering will be over.

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 8:03:00 PM

    lovely PD

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 9:50:00 AM

    Nicely written............. George

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 4:04:00 PM

    Excellent piece from my fav poet and and a new one!!! I love that your son is giving it a try.. Bravo!!! hugs Michael

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 3:17:00 PM

    Yes great to get your son involved in the poetry P D..)

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 3:15:00 PM

    Pleased to read this family piece P D,, I think it is great!!!! Joe..)

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 2:24:00 PM

    What a great thing for you two to write this together.I sure hope Rover is OK. Well done both of you!!!! Anne

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 12:16:00 PM

    is is friday there, PD??.. have a good one!... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 10:02:00 AM

    Nice little although a little sad poem by you and your son. How old is your son PD, He appears to have inherited some writing skills from you and would be a wonderful writer soon. Hope your dog would soon get well my friend. If this poem is for a contest my good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Poet D.

Next>|Last