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The Soup

All those times she took out her tablecloth and spread it
'O so gently'
kept me coming back.
It was her soup I'd see.
The celery bits I'd act.

A broth to be tapped
of oil not strewn.
As thick as the sun
but thin to the spoon.

With bowls like skirts
defending their space.
on modest placemats
marked for grace.

Down splendored chairs
of darkened walnut
My eyes remember
The meal; a moment.

And on her face
her smile and grace
Remind me of
A better place.

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  1. Date: 1/24/2013 5:28:00 PM

    Very nice too Trevor, xxx

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 8:03:00 AM

    Sweet and tender imagery...congrats on being featured this week, Trevor! A pleasant and soothing write. Wishing you the best...Mikki

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 7:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Trevor

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 5:01:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Trevor. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 3:28:00 PM

    Trevor, this is the poem that was picked by me to read today of yours. Lots of memories in this bowl of soup I see. Splended writing. Love, carol