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The Fire, Fury, and Sacrifice

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The Fire, Fury, and Sacrifice

The Fire, Fury, and Sacrifice


I have felt the fire of our love,
the fury of being left alone after the fire died,
And the sacrifice of putting my life to an end.
I never though that you who said you loved 
me would be the one to take away everything 
from me.I'll burn in this fire my fury won't be 
contain as i pull your heart out with my dagger 
of sacrifice,You'll see the the pain,the torment and 
danger you put me through.Could you sleep knowing 
you the danger I was put into? Tonight I will put this 
dagger into you pulling your heart out and leaving 
with the blood of revenge upon my hands.today I 
smile for you no longer walk this earth with your 
mouth filled with lies and torment.This day I walk with 
a hand of care the hand of love the hand of a new.Once 
I felt the fire of our love,The fury of being left alone after 
that fire died,And the sacrifice of putting a end to my own life and yours.

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  1. Date: 5/22/2012 7:18:00 AM

    Marcedies wow, don't do it..David