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Pinnochio

Do you see what we've done?
I'm so tired of all these mistakes
I've made a fool of myself
Shaking, trembling in a thousand quakes

You cried to me, but I no longer care
That voice of yours haunts me everywhere

I watch you from here, so sullenly
At the time it all felt so right
But you told lies like pinnochio
And I had to take off in the night

Ready to smile again, but it won't come
My story should end but it's just begun



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  1. Date: 8/9/2012 11:10:00 PM

    I'm sure it will be a better story with a happy ending! They say that time is the healer, Juli-Michelle. Wishing you great happiness and Joy! Mikki

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 5:30:00 PM

    interesting' thank you for the comment

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 5:28:00 PM

    This reads like a song. I think it could easily be put to music. Umm men telling lies? Ya can't live wiff them and ya can't shoot them.

    Michelle Avatar Juli- Michelle Date: 5/21/2012 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Totally true :D thanks!