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Tarnishing Woe

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Below is the poem entitled Tarnishing Woe which was written by poet David William Breidenthal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Tarnishing Woe




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Wrapped in woe
Here is a gash to sow
Pierced by bow

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Struck in woe
Here is a boat to row
Sunk by blow

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Scorched in woe
Here's a soul to mend
Seared by woe

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Slashed by woe
Here is a wound to sow
Bruised by woe...









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  1. Date: 5/23/2012 4:35:00 AM

    very interesting poem, Ivy

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 5:17:00 PM

    Amazing, interesting talents you have, David, writing among them, putting images to words another. Thanks so much for sharing, I hope to read more of yours :) empathy is strong in my reading today =Juli-Michelle=

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal Date: 5/21/2012 8:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks, Juli- ! i hope you have a wonderful day ahead of you! :))