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Stormy 4th of July

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Stormy 4th of July

 -last year 2011-! xD

We are tackling with traffic 
The night's gonna be fantastic 

Frankly, I'm not excited about the fireworks 
There's gonna be people acting like jerks 

Never mind that, I'm a little fascinated by the hue of sparkling, enchanting light 

I heard it's gonna be stormy tonight 
The fireworks will make it so darn tight 

What a stormy, enchanting night!

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  1. Date: 5/22/2012 11:26:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today David. Love, Carol