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Take your bow


Run, run, run
Is all I hear
Speak to me.
Whisper in my ear.

Looking over my shoulder
Nothing there to see
Hit the door
But I have no key.

Locked out or locked in.
Either way no way to escape
All my demons 
Takeing all these shapes.

Consider it yours
Consider me done
Take your prize,
Now youv'e won
 
Settle the sea
Calm the crooks
Raise the house 
They shall read this in every book

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  1. Date: 5/21/2012 7:05:00 AM

    Take your bow,Stacey,nice

    Brackley Avatar Stacey Brackley Date: 5/21/2012 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you vert much... Stacey
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 6:05:00 AM

    Very carefully thought out... I would call it a QUATRAIN, (4-line verses.) Well rhymed, with a pleasing cadence. BRAVO, Stacey! Best wishes, Keith

    Brackley Avatar Stacey Brackley Date: 5/21/2012 6:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I really don'y know any peorty terminolgy- they don't tend to teach you that side of of it in schools, so thank you. Stacey
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 5:08:00 AM

    Sad indeed, sense the futility

    Brackley Avatar Stacey Brackley Date: 5/21/2012 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for taking the time to read it... Stacey