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temperature

 for the word contest: my word is temperature

today, it rained little sprinkles like drops of a single tear
but the sounds of thunder sent shockwaves thru my ear
...I sat alone, in the kitchen, peering out the window as I ate
this may be a storm coming, I'm just guessing, I rate
a pitter and a patter
I just sat there as if the noise didn't matter
drinking my tea
and eating my meat
enduring the rumble, like it was music, some form of art
the thunder roared... I hate this part
the rain got heavy, mature
then came all the lightning and rapture
I can't stand days like this...but nonetheless, it's nature, it's pure
the bright side is...when it clears up, it'll bring a nice temperature

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  1. Date: 5/21/2012 1:35:00 PM

    It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Natalie. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 5:12:00 AM

    Excellent choice and well written piece. Good luck in the contest.

    Braddy Avatar Natalie Braddy Date: 5/21/2012 5:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    @Anthony, thank u and thanks for reading!