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Sweet Sensation

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Sweet Sensation

Real love, don't act it,
Its cold,please hot it,
All yours, attack it,
Continue, don't stop it...

Thick,not thin,
Awwww,slide in,
Different positions,
360,rotating...

Open,when I stick,
Hard,like a brick,
Tock,when I tick,
Smooth,and slick...

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:30:00 AM

    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 3/25/2013 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Funom,lol,enjoy to the fullest
  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:46:00 AM

    Not to much detail but still does the trick. lol : ) LUV~Sammie~

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/21/2012 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Sammie nuff luv
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:02:00 AM

    I dont know how I skipped this one, but damn" MY THOUGHTS EXACLLY...... Come n' get it lol

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/16/2012 2:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    here I come,thanks much Carma
    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 8/16/2012 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    EXACTLLY!!!
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 4:48:00 PM

    Must say, you write it as it is,

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/19/2012 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes I do,lol,thanks Dawn
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 12:25:00 PM

    oooooh naughty naughty island boy. The things you say be not for sleepin. I be thinkin this stimulate more than da mind. lol lol TLee

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/7/2012 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    bite your lips,lol,thanks Terry
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:06:00 AM

    powerfully suggestive! And, thank you for commenting on my poem I validate! Nola

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/31/2012 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Nola,I think reading should stimulate our minds....
  1. Date: 5/26/2012 9:05:00 PM

    seductive and lyrical......sensual and hehehe....clever Richard!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/27/2012 3:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Shaz,aim to be
  1. Date: 5/25/2012 5:36:00 PM

    A very sensual piece you have penned here. Well done on such a good write!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/26/2012 7:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    happy to get your sensual mind active,lol,thanks alot
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 8:30:00 PM

    Weee! Full of passion.. lol.. wow... the image.. is...wowwwww..always..pd

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/26/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks DP,Weeee
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 6:57:00 PM

    You got the ladies ticking here with your sweet sensation, enjoyed your lyric Richard, hugs vie

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/24/2012 5:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks alot Vie,hugs hugs
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 12:00:00 PM

    That IS a sweet sensation,brother! Smooth:-)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/24/2012 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    very sweet,Ertsland,thanks
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 10:58:00 AM

    Lovely poem and so sweet baby photo (love that baby....is the baby big now/is it you?) - Tick - tock from Anne-Lise

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/23/2012 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Anne,no that's my son,my pic is posted now
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 6:57:00 AM

    Brings erotic visions to mind.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/23/2012 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha ha ,thanks Anthony
  1. Date: 5/22/2012 6:22:00 PM

    What a cool piece! '...tock when I tick, smooth and slick,' hotly sensual, and a whole lotta fun! Peace, Richard.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/23/2012 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    peace,keith,happy you enjoyed
  1. Date: 5/22/2012 7:47:00 AM

    Sizzling and seductive write....I like!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/22/2012 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks alot,Cecilia
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 8:26:00 PM

    "What are you describing, Richard? Lol. Very cool. Thanks for visiting my site. I just posted the second one. Hope you enjoy it. Toquyen"

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/22/2012 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Close your eyes,bite your lips,you will figure it out,lol,i wll,thanks
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 1:57:00 PM

    Like your poem,you give just enough for start and then let it sizzle in readers mind,how brilliant,Ivy

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/22/2012 3:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks,Ivy
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 11:34:00 AM

    Damn, quite the hot poem you got here. Thank you for reading mine as well ;) -Lily <3

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/22/2012 3:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    liked yours just as much,thanks
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 8:59:00 AM

    Lol!!! Wow, this is awesome!! Strictly for the ladies!! Thanks for stopping by....love the Jamaican slang

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/22/2012 3:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I love your poems and style,you got a fan,thanks
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 7:12:00 AM

    Real love is hot...and so is this poem Richard. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/22/2012 3:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and passionate,thanks Anne
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 6:57:00 AM

    hehe, now the people in the office are wondering why I am smiling.. :) enjoyed Richard

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/22/2012 3:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks hope to make u laugh a lot more,Wilma
  1. Date: 5/20/2012 10:24:00 AM

    hmhmm!! Sweet sensation indeed!! I can see you are a lovaman...smile. Joy Wells

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/22/2012 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Joy thanks for reminding me,love your comments