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A June Flower

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A June Flower

At first it was only a seed. I said to myself, maybe this is something that I need. I took it home with me and with soil that I had - I planted there my seed. I nursed it with love and water that fell from heaven. Everyday I would check on it, until one day, I saw a sprout. I gave thanks to God, He was also doing His part. I gave it tender loving care, made sure it got water and sunshine too. It made me very happy as I was watching my flower grow. It was June when she came to life. One day she was all grown and I couldn't love her more. It was my daughter, that I would love forever more. She was born the 23 of June. Those are the memories that I can never forget... Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo This is for Joann Grisetti's contest June Memories

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 8:27:00 AM
    The day beore my mother's birthday, this is a wonderful gem of a poem...

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 6:18:00 PM
    this is wonderful. Tell her happy birthday for me!!

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 10:45:00 AM
    she came into this world with loving care , and with you, your love and life she would share. she is in a beautiful garden created by you and the LORD has helped you see it through. she has to read your thoughts and feelings from this poem. god bless !

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 5/26/2012 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Louis for your kind words. Lucilla
  1. Date: 5/22/2012 12:08:00 PM
    joyful poem. May the lord forever sprinkle his glorious blessings upon you. Ronny

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 5/24/2012 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Ronny; Thank you for your visit and rweading my poem. Many blessings. Lucilla
  1. Date: 5/20/2012 7:13:00 PM
    Delightful, Lucilla! Is there a more joyous occasion than the birth of your child! God bless, Keith

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 5/21/2012 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Keith for your nice comment. Many blessings. Lucilla
  1. Date: 5/20/2012 3:28:00 PM
    Lucilla, woooow ...just beautiful written, love it from the first line to the last. - Wish you luck in contest !!!! You have to win, it is a win poem for me.Have a lovely new week. Take care. - oxox love from Anne-Lise

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 5/20/2012 6:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Anne; Thanks it is nice of you to think that. Have a good night. Lucilla
  1. Date: 5/20/2012 1:52:00 AM
    Lucilla, a wonderful poem and memory to hold... .. thank you for sharing and expressing your poem with us. Take care~ Linda

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 5/20/2012 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much. and God bless you. Lucilla
  1. Date: 5/19/2012 7:36:00 PM
    Ah such wonderful memories daughters live in the summer season of our hearts forever, thank you Lucilla for sharing this beauty, luv vie

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 5/20/2012 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for enjoying my poem. I only had one daughter. many blessings. Lucilla
  1. Date: 5/19/2012 6:56:00 PM
    Very good work...good luck, Lucilla!

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 5/19/2012 7:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you much. I like the sound of that music. Many blessings. Lucilla
    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 5/19/2012 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you much for comment on a june Flower. Many blessings. Lucilla