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Thin Line

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Thin Line

Thin Line 

You hate me when i am around you 
you hate me when i am away
if hating thrives you everyday
i am your energy and 
your medicine at your need
when you gossip for your play.

Poetry 5/18/12 by  Keith K. Relf

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  1. Date: 6/11/2012 6:49:00 PM
    hate destroys,nice write Keith check my Love vs Hate,think you will like

    Relf Avatar Keith Relf
    Date: 6/12/2012 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for good comment... :D
  1. Date: 5/22/2012 6:54:00 AM
    Touching poem Keith, you have to visit my poems - I have only happy poem :) :) - oxox love and smile to you Anne-Lise

    Relf Avatar Keith Relf
    Date: 5/22/2012 2:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you.... looking to make another positive poem.
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 7:29:00 PM
    past experiences, i'll be okay... thanks

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 6:32:00 PM
    sounds to me like you need someone more loving in your life. Enjoyed your poem. Hugs, Catie :)