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  1. Date: 6/14/2012 10:38:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, David! Felicitations!!Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 5:20:00 AM

    A belated congratulations David on your placement in Cyndi's "Un, Deux, Trois" contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 5:06:00 PM

    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:32:00 AM

    How wonderful!! You made it all sound heavenly!! Congrats on your win, David!!

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:18:00 AM

    Congrats on the win in my contest, David. My fave line was Piece de resistance we devour... a genuine thank you for inspiring a poem with your last contest. I can't find the winners and would so like to read the poems! Did soup put the list somewhere weird? I can't remember who used to have problems with that...they'd close their contest and all their contests were listed under May 1.... some glitche. Hope you're doing well.. what is the weather like in your neck of the woods? Rainy here. :-)

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 2:46:00 AM

    Big Congrats David very romantic xx

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 3:27:00 AM

    sounds romantic and full of bliss, the tender love the sweetes kiss, great poetry here ol mate, sounds like fun for sure....

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 1:27:00 PM

    NO SPEAK NO FRENCH HERE, David!...But I believe this is as great an entry as any other...powerful rhyming scheme and it has a sense of "the lights turned down low."...what a romantic piece! :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 12:08:00 PM

    A great image. You couldn't have brought ours minds to Paris, France better in any other way... And great imagery.

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 8:19:00 PM

    :) oooh, how delightful...your imagery puts the reader right there;) C'est Manifique!!! big hugs and best wishes in the contest, love ya Cap'n deb

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 5:37:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winner to me..I recognize a few words..Taking a course in French would be fun I think..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is so uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 2:59:00 PM

    very nice! best of luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 1:58:00 PM

    Vive Paris et tout c'est beaute la joie de vivre, la pluits des anges Bravo mons petit ami, tons poeme est irresistible est romantique, xxxxVie

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 1:26:00 PM

    Showing off David...that's not fair, lol....good luck!