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the cat awakens

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the cat awakens

This is my attempt at Haiku (I hope I got the rules right):


                                        a soft thud again
                                 silent approaching nuzzle
                                       gentle purring fluff

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  1. Date: 5/18/2012 2:09:00 PM
    You did it well Lorraine, like it alot. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 12:00:00 PM
    You followed the rules of form to perfection. very nice haiku. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 11:42:00 AM
    and what a beautiful job you did.. I just wrote one about a cat also..