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Goodbye My Favorite One

_____ with a teardrop frozen in time yellow and red coating this mysterious life creeping in silence abound in demise so little glory as our love lie smothered rusted within time..... _____

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  1. Date: 5/24/2012 6:47:00 PM

    Rick,, Congratulations in, Brian's contest # 178 "' it's been an honor reading all these sweet hits... especially since i miss them all on the 200 poems of the day ;-) God Bless*~ PD

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 5:54:00 PM

    second to last line [lies?] Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 5:41:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Rick! A lovely and poignant write...Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 7:23:00 PM

    Very nice, Rick. Congrats on the win. Are you the one with the tanka contest? I love that idea of calling it a love note.

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 2:25:00 PM

    Rick congrats on your win..david

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 6:07:00 AM

    Precious poem congrats Rick on your special win luv vie

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 5:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win ^Rick. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 2:02:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Rick! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 2:40:00 PM

    Old LOVE never rusts Rick. Well written!!! - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 11:52:00 AM

    teardrops will rust, sad sentiments.

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 11:47:00 AM

    O the rust, O the rust! Ilove your poem, Rick. I can easily relate to this one. It's beautiful! hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 11:25:00 AM

    Oh! Painful nostalgia...So beautiful, Rick! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 11:16:00 AM

    You are very nostalgic with recent poems. is this for an old flame? I enjoyed this. See ya! andrea