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No Anger

lying on my beach towel on a wooden bench under a make shift tent,
Staring at the sea rolling gently out to meet the heavens,
I close my eyes,such a relaxing moment,
As the cool evening breeze pulls me deep into slumber,
I hear the faint screams of kids,splashing,enjoying the water,
I hear the quiet roar of the sea, crashing into the shore,
GOSH,this feels great,pulled even deeper,
The smell of fresh sea breeze rushes into my nostril,
Taking a deep breath,I fill my lungs before exhaling,
I feel so comfortable,so peaceful,so out of this world,
No anger,no hate,I don't want to go back,
I want to stay here,living behind closed eyelids
,Suddenly I am jolted from this lovely place,
Where heavens gate opened and I was walking on the streets of gold,
Pulled back to reality by tiny missiles flying through the air,
Stinging my face and half naked body,
Poppled from peace to anger,
I jump to my feet ,ready to unleash,
Only to be calmed, by a beautiful little girl, with a plastic shovel....

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  1. Date: 9/3/2012 9:54:00 AM

    A beautiful poem, and the last line is so lovely

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/3/2012 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks much Vesna
  1. Date: 7/15/2012 4:32:00 AM

    Tis' a delight tu relax in such a place whe we can just a go All worries behind with nuh care in di world... But reality is always tuk in di way.... Damn' it!!!!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/15/2012 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    so true,oxoxox Carma thanks
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 3:47:00 PM

    Beautifully put. A day's escape to such a peaceful place to meditate. Of course, I've been there. Makes me feel better when there's something so innocent that means no harm :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/1/2012 4:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Brittany
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 8:33:00 AM

    beautiful..and last line is so sweet..i could definately picture this.. :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/27/2012 3:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Keisha
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 2:10:00 PM

    '' Only to be calmed,by a beautiful girl,with a plastic shovel.....'' innocent way to come back to reality ,again love your writing,Ivy

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/22/2012 3:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Ivy
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 1:27:00 PM

    Hi Richard just dropped by from the caht room saw your name and thought i would check out your style and i have to say i was blown away by this write loved keep up the good work all the best Owen

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/22/2012 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks alot Owen,happy to please
  1. Date: 5/20/2012 10:29:00 AM

    I chuckled while reading the last lines, especially the very last one....giggling here! Nice write Rich!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/22/2012 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    nuff love Joy,thanks
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 8:57:00 AM

    Richard good imagery here, I like it..David

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/18/2012 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks David,enjoyed your poems, quite a writer