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Goodebye

Now your'e scared
Now you know the truth
Bite your tounge
See how long that lasts.

I frightend you away
I showed you the inside
You didn't understand
You never could

Now I'm alone, once again
Abanonded and forgotton
Hurts less and less
It's not your fualt

Think what you wish
I know what you think
I see it too
Now leave.

I'll call for you one last time
I'll shout your name.
You will never free me
No one can ever dfree me.














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  1. Date: 5/18/2012 5:18:00 AM

    Stacey I like this, slight twist at the end..David

    Brackley Avatar Stacey Brackley Date: 5/18/2012 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David :)
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 4:39:00 AM

    Touching poem, but well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Brackley Avatar Stacey Brackley Date: 5/18/2012 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, I appreciate it :) x
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 4:29:00 AM

    a sad poem, to me it speaks of disappointing ourselves. very nice. hugs, Catie :)

    Brackley Avatar Stacey Brackley Date: 5/18/2012 4:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I suppose it is largely about disapointment, nut also freedom :) thank you for commenting, Satcey