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  1. Date: 5/31/2012 9:10:00 PM
    love it

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:05:00 PM
    Just when you couldn't get any better, you come out with this beautiful poem. Nicely done poet.

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 5:36:00 PM
    Classic masterpiece!! Perfection in word, verse and nature.

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 7:28:00 AM
    Such a beautiful 'Concrete' dear poet ! Awesome write ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 5:28:00 AM
    Beautiful depth and tibute to nature. Your words really paint a fantastic imagery and I thank you for that!

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 9:43:00 PM
    Wonderful poem says something depth. Wish you all the best for the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 8:44:00 AM
    I am stopping by your poetry to thank you for your kind comments on my writing. It has been a pleasure to read yours today Marlon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 8:07:00 AM
    And so the bee kisses the rose; eventually that love affair blossoms into honey. Love this soft poem Marlon, it describes one of nature's miracles beautifully. :)

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 12:52:00 PM
    Brother, you knw i've read most of ur poetry and i like the versitility in work. And this poem was like dessert. Very touching flow. This is beatiful.

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Amazing piece my Poet brother.... so enjoyed.. Michael

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 5:31:00 AM
    Beautiful canvas painted by colorful words. Dio

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 12:15:00 AM

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 9:22:00 PM
    "Lovely. I can just visualize it. Two beautiful creations together in perfect harmony. Love your variety, special ways of looking at things. Toquyen"

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 7:06:00 PM
    WOW! I can see that you really took your time to write this one. A beautiful piece of work. Many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 3:31:00 PM
    Hi ROMANTIC YOU!! Fun shape poem and a special theme!...Just a tho't...Change the category of your poem from shape to CONCRETE...This is bc in concrete form the poem describes the shape itself! Nicely penned! Look up forms on this site. Love to ya, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 12:01:00 PM
    I love the thought that went into this poem. And the way you delivered it was great.

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 11:41:00 PM
    Brilliant, superb and outstanding in depths. This poem is definitely a matchless beauty among any other of yours I have read so far. Great write my friend and thank you for your continued interest in my series poems. Love and best wishes..Ravindra...Marlon Linton

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 6:26:00 PM
    Amazing that the bee helps with the pollination isn't it..God knew what he was doing..Interesting work..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 1:42:00 PM
    Scribe, very good I like, thanks for your comment, but it's amazing what you can find on the net!!ha ha ....David

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 12:04:00 PM
    Wonderful shape poem. I like to write these as well. Wish people could learn to get along like the rose and bee.