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  1. Date: 2/15/2013 12:01:00 AM
    Forgot to point out to you that this had a typo in it: last line of first stanza, should be "am" instead of "an" Loved your imagery in this one.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:57:00 PM
    Caleb, I see the thing in this poem that you and I have in common. You love "patterns" in your poetry. I think I have noticed it before. I just adore making things match up!! It's all so artistic. Well about as artistic as someone like myself can get, with no ability for painting!!! This is a lovely poem!

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 7:16:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Caleb. Have a wonderful weekend. I will return another time to read more. Love, Carol

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    Date: 5/18/2012 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is much appreciated Carol!