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Wild reflection

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Wild reflection

The shake of her digits
as the she
with palm up high
gazed at I,
knowing all the while
mine reflection
was wild

The pane betwixt us
thick as ice,
as the he
over her shoulder
intently, with nervous;
did construed why

His beam from 
beginning to end
did declare pronouncement,
not with lips
yet with eyes;

good-by !





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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:14:00 PM
    James , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 7:24:00 AM
    Yes, heat I find with my crossed eyes as I drink the nectar of thy words. Soup mails

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 1:03:00 PM
    The eyes are the window to the soul so it is said and the message they contain can be read by those connected. Great one James! :)

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 3:20:00 PM
    aww thats a lovley poem, God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 9:15:00 AM
    Ah this is a sad ending as the lips shall not meet. Enjoyed your poem with my morning coffee. Have a great day. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 1:30:00 PM
    A sad, surprising end to a lovely poem.

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Nice write. Didn't see the ending coming.