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Busy in my SOLITUDE

Taking a deep breath ..... i looked around....
There is a golden boundary... with lots of sound....

Why are they yelling.... I asked my self....
They need you ... what my heart compels....

Looking at them by clearing my eyes ...
I found they are the one's i needed once i realize...

For what they turned up i wonder....
Now i am obsessed i surrender...

when i needed them ....they were busy...
least bothered and had there own priorities..

Now when i learnt to be obsessed....
                           You call it an attitude....
please leave me alone ...
                           I am too busy in my solitude....

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  1. Date: 8/18/2012 12:07:00 AM

    'Iam too busy in my solitude'...the ending line is so perfect.well done :)

    Bhandula Avatar Nishu Bhandula Date: 8/18/2012 1:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you mam ... thnk u so much
  1. Date: 7/17/2012 2:34:00 AM

    nice poetic interpretations .thank you for sharing .jk

    Bhandula Avatar Nishu Bhandula Date: 7/17/2012 3:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks alot