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Light in Your Eyes

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Light in Your Eyes

There’s a light in your eyes… (3)
There’s a shimmering light 
I’m gazing dreamily at your sparkling eyes
I can taste a smile creeping in…it’s such a surprise
I’m staring longingly at your glistening eyes
I can feel a grin flaring up…you’re my exquisite prize

There’s a light in your eyes… (3)
You absorbed me with your highs… (2)
And the wind whirls and sighs 
There’s a night shunning out your eyes… (2)
You disobeyed me with your lies…
And my spirit drifts away and dies   

You fought my battles for me relentlessly…I’m overflowing with jollity
You lead me to your heart’s desire and it made me cheery and teary
You shot the predator chasing after me; you are my heroic hero
You nurtured me with your affection and wiped away the sorrow

There’s an angel in your eyes… (3)
You gather up your joy…floating away gleefully
There’s a DEMON in your eyes… (2)
You wave your farewells as your innocence dies dreadfully     
 
I’m peeking at your heart…Will I find our love pulsating with gratitude and vigor?
I can sense a warm feeling digging in; you grant me your tranquil, hopeful favor
I’m memorizing your voice…Will I ever experience your boldness and victory?
I can smell a soothing aroma seeping out; you are hovering like angels elevating with glory

There’s a light in your eyes
Your happiness glides
I can feel it when you signal your goodbyes
Your shadiness subsides
There’s an eccentric beam bursting in your eyes
Your ruefulness hides
I can sense it when you vomit your lies
Your betrayal shredding your insides

There’s a storm stroking your eyes
There’s a storm obliterating your eyes! 
But, I still sense your light dancing in your eyes 

There’s a light abolishing your joy that I yearn in my heart
There’s a night blotching the luminous light exploding in your eyes
There’s a delight bestowing joy that has torn me apart
There’s a plight that interrupted our time together…we shall depart

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