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Standing At Love's Door

Precious is the heart whom sheds a tear, to catch

Its light upon bended knee; gently in these hands

A priceless jewel; a sparkling diamond to behold....

Rejoicing anew while pirouetting about; tomorrows

Stage aneath a fingertips touch; warmth this breath

With dreamful wings; and she shall soar; amid vibrant

Colours of a promise; beyound eternals, forevermore

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...."Standing, 'At Love's Door'" ~

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  1. Date: 9/20/2012 5:00:00 PM

    The title caught my eye,,,, the poem caught my heart,,,,, you have a blessed day John ;}

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 12:17:00 PM

    I bid you farewell dear heart, as God has called my attentions elsewhere in life than this site. I hope you are feeling good. God bless, All my loving for you brother, Just Cindy

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 2:46:00 PM

    Couldn't resist the title and happen to love the poem. It's that eternal pull that keeps up humanyou manage to describe so provocatively! :) Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 12:43:00 AM

    So beautiful are your words which flow from heart to verse John.Hope you are doing fine ... Charma

    Lu Avatar Cindy Lu Date: 5/28/2012 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    May you find comfort and rest, and bless all those you and I love, I love you very, very much brother...Journey on~ :)
    Lu Avatar Cindy Lu Date: 5/28/2012 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    God bless you on your walk with the Lord, love, Cindy
  1. Date: 5/20/2012 2:01:00 AM

    just lovely !!! you have my heart, Amy

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 12:09:00 AM

    Glad you enjoyed Time and Chance, John. This is a deeply moving poem - beautifully written. God bless, Maureen

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 11:36:00 PM

    A Soul of compassion and spiritual - the wings of the spirit catches your prayers and takes them to the Father. Blessings, Bren : )

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:01:00 PM

    Mmmm, nice write John. God bless. Dave.

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:00:00 PM

    Mmmm, nice write John. God bless. Dave.

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 12:19:00 PM

    No words to thank but with my heart indeed, wonderful concept of love, always, bl

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 8:53:00 AM

    precious are these words John as your opening line is an emotional visual luv.. superbly penned on love ..luv..

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 5:47:00 PM

    This is so beautiful John. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 5:13:00 PM

    ohhhh....John...such a tender heart...so deeply touching....hugs, love ya --deb