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I dream of a great and distant place

I dream of a great and distant place
It is mine, only I hold the key 
There are many fears I have to face 

Meadow, temple, goddess of grace 
Wending brook, glittering tree 
I dream of a great and distant place 

It becomes vague, it is now a trace
So very far, so very hard to see
There are many fears I have to face 

Falling into my city's warm embrace
Take me away, hear my plea 
I dream of a great and distance place 

To these enchanted thoughts I race 
From the staleness of now I flee 
There are many fears I have to face 

With a breath it will vanish, in a second erase 
Once more I feel a cold pull inside me 
I dream of a great and distant place
There are many fears I have to face 

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:07:00 PM

    Jeremy, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA**

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 9:17:00 PM

    This is a difficult form to endeavor you did well, enjoyed hugs vie

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 5:01:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jeremy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 12:24:00 AM

    A lovely dream...dream more Jeremy - well done poem. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 2:25:00 PM

    Good dream and well written poem. - oxox hug Anne-Lise