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Doble Capricorn-Reposted for Contest

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Doble Capricorn-Reposted for Contest

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Doble Acrostic
Certainly, more than critical: caustiC At times, a realm of nostalgiA Partly wolf, yet a naïve puP Ruled by Saturn: authority and ordeR In quest of gold and glory quasI Confident. Persistence is a tiC On perfection efforts gO Responsibility foR Natural skiN
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  1. Date: 6/8/2012 10:06:00 PM
    Hmmm, was this contest ever judged. It was so clever but I see no congrats. What would make this even cooler is if you were a double capricorn with both moon and sun in Capricorn, are you?

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 6:50:00 AM
    Creative and great work on a difficult one to write..One has to think to do one like this..Thanks for stopping by and reading so many of mine works..Sara

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 11:20:00 PM
    i'll drink to this one, ruben... not only is the piece a creative endeavor but also full of substance ... love it because i am capricornian, awwh!..:) winning huggs!

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 11:09:00 AM
    Wonderfully creative. i'm not sure many could do this, but I am going to try.

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 2:50:00 AM
    great poetry here mate i see, flowing very naturally, great insight...

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 2:26:00 AM
    Are you dyslexic, or what?...Your skills in this contest entry are second to none! Impressed to the hilt! Gwendolen

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    Date: 5/18/2012 10:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You made me laugh! This comment is so funny!
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 8:38:00 AM
    always artistic with creative words Ruben luv.. good luck to u as this depicts the sign so uniquely luv..

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 8:38:00 AM
    always artistic with creative words Ruben luv.. good luck to u as this depicts the sign so uniquely luv..

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 6:22:00 AM
    My my we got creative here, love it Ruben, hugs vie

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 6:21:00 AM
    My my we got creative here, love it Ruben, hugs vie

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 3:41:00 AM
    Ruben, I like this, now put the ice cream away ha ha ha..David

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:17:00 PM
    hey, this is so cool how you did it on both ends. VEry cool, my friend. HOw is it going for you these days?

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:27:00 AM
    Partly wolf,yet a naive pup... this gave me a wide smile,from the side of my mouth to the other ...lol :).All the above definitely describes all the double capricorns i know :)... .Once you posted once an acrostic re the capricorn i think?or maybe my imagination... Well done Ruben !

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:27:00 AM
    Partly wolf,yet a naive pup... this gave me a wide smile,from the side of my mouth to the other ...lol :).All the above definitely describes all the double capricorns i know :)... .Once you posted once an acrostic re the capricorn i think?or maybe my imagination... Well done Ruben !

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:21:00 AM
    Wow, Very impressive!!!And I as well am a Capricorn..A fav for me Ruben!! And I fixed my poem...thank you again.

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 11:38:00 PM
    A double acrostic is quite impressive! Being a Capricorn, this is a must for my favorites. Best wishes in the contest...I didn't even know there was an acrostic contest up! Time to go check the contest list. Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 9:53:00 PM
    Brilliantly done Ruben!! best wishes in the contest...big hugs, love ya deb