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  1. Date: 6/3/2012 9:14:00 AM

    Hello David .... A beautiful theory and vision... i think this is just adorable and no-one locks the cat-flap do they.....truly lovely write... thanks karen...

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 9:44:00 AM

    very nice you have my heart, amy

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 2:22:00 AM

    I like this,,,, very nicely done ;}

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 10:51:00 AM

    love the clever imagery here, David. Many congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:35:00 AM

    David - This is sensational! The cat flap of my heart is too too good. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 3:19:00 PM

    love the humour David, enjoyed this. harry

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 3:08:00 PM

    I am sure that you did not mean to be funny but for some reason the last line struck me as funny for I could just see my cat stretches and leaving..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 1:40:00 PM

    Very touching, David. Your wife is SOOO lucky to have a romantic husband. Just love this poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:09:00 PM

    hi david yet another corker loved it, have a good week will drop in sometime, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:59:00 AM

    lovely write David!

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 9:29:00 AM

    Oh how true!! Very well done David!! like this a lot!! big hugs, love ya, cap'n deb

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:33:00 AM

    Nicely written and explored David :) Thank you for your kind comments, much blessings, Bren : )

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:19:00 AM

    The cat is its own master David, well written. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well said Anne Lise!! well said! :) love ya deb
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:04:00 AM

    Aww...Very nice. Understanding. and Thought provoking. Keep it up. And thanks so much for all the comments

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 6:52:00 AM

    awe... but the touch remains. Loved it, David. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 5:18:00 AM

    very nice metaphor! it works really well.