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Fight for life

People need to realize,

Never to give up a fight.

It is their birth right,

To live a better life.

A life full of love,

full of happiness.

A life full of vibrations,

Vibrations of the feel,

The feel which makes us sing,

The feel which makes us dance,

The feel which makes us alive.

Oh,how I wish.

I could make people realize,

Never to give up a fight.


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  1. Date: 7/8/2012 9:40:00 PM

    Such an inspirational piece! Nicely composed and expressed, with fine rhyming and flow. BRAVO! Best wishes, Keith

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/9/2012 1:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for posting yor comment:)
  1. Date: 7/6/2012 12:03:00 PM

    Oh how I wish you could do that as well. Sometimes it's just easier to give up as sadly as that may be. Great write.

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/9/2012 1:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    true.Giving up is sad.Thanks for yor comment:)
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 2:56:00 AM

    ifn ya get down ...spring up like a young mountain goat, n go on...

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 6/14/2012 3:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    absolutely true and thanks for the comment
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 9:53:00 PM

    Right on!.....So keep writing on! :o)

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 6/14/2012 3:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:27:00 AM

    You are right in all your lines here in this poem Mad. Very well written, it is good! - oxox love from Anne-Lise (never give up!)

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 5/14/2012 9:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne for such encouraging words.
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 5:20:00 AM

    Yes, I agree with you, never give up a fight. Nice poem and meaningful poem. Enjoyed.

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 5/14/2012 9:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for the comment
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 4:14:00 AM

    Mad, evocative words, thanks for your comments..David

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 5/14/2012 4:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 4:05:00 AM

    Ya its true "Never to give up a fight".

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 5/14/2012 4:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank u Sirisha
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 3:57:00 AM

    Ya its true "Never to give up a fight".