Piercing Rays by Ruben O.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2013 7:58:00 PM

:-) I can not help on picking my winning poems... I pick them and sort them out to my likings. As a matter of fact, I don't really like it when poets put their names on the bottom of the poems, unless I ask of it. But, that does not really matter 75% of the time I know who the poem belongs to with or with out the name attached. wink! wink! And thanks for putting a smile on my face with that comment.. ha ha.. it made me feel normal. :-) PD

Tanya Harrington

Date: 6/6/2012 12:32:00 PM

A beautiful scene you paint! Tanya

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/22/2012 8:12:00 AM

I am stopping by your poetry to thank you for your kind comments on my writing. It has been a pleasure to read yours today Ruben. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/17/2012 10:12:00 PM

RUBEN , congratulations in Brian's contest.. Take care and have yourself a good night ~ always* PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2012 8:27:00 PM

Hey, a double purpose poem!! Congrats on the HM with this one. It's so lovely. Still love the feathers line.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2012 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations on you placement in Brian's "177" contest Ruben. Love, Carol

Mystic Rose

Date: 5/16/2012 8:23:00 PM

A beautiful poem enjoyed your point of view, congrats Ruben, luv vie

Mystic Rose

Date: 5/16/2012 8:23:00 PM

A beautiful poem enjoyed your point of view, congrats Ruben, luv vie

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/16/2012 5:48:00 PM

I agree with Deb....that last line is stunning and not at all expected!! (sign of greatness!) :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/16/2012 12:58:00 PM

Love the last line..ohhhh..nice [feathered spring!] Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 5/16/2012 12:31:00 PM

Ruben congrats on your win,,cool..David

Bob Quigley

Date: 5/16/2012 11:59:00 AM

Congratulations Rubin on your HM

elizabeth wesley

Date: 5/15/2012 9:17:00 AM

Hi Ruben, that kaleidoscope of sun rays piecing the foliaage is such a lovely image to think on. Reminds me of the walks I take each day through the woodlands here with the shadows dancing. I'm really into this one. Luv, Lizzy

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/14/2012 10:47:00 PM

This is absolutely gorgeous bro. I'm glad to have you for a BUD. I'll take more of this.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2012 9:15:00 PM

what a wonderful line: as spring has not feathers yet. Love it.

harry horsman

Date: 5/14/2012 3:30:00 PM

nice one Ruben, love this adaption of the picture you have written for the contest. harry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/14/2012 2:50:00 PM

I especially like the last line..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading the creativity..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Yes, fast food can put on pounds and hurt the purse strings but one has to eat out occasionally..Most places have a salad or fruit that I like..Sara

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT

Date: 5/14/2012 12:26:00 PM

This is definitely an attention grabber..great work here Ruben!!

SCRIBE ML

Date: 5/14/2012 11:42:00 AM

Postcard write...nice! Thanks for the insight on the Senryu....good information. Deals with human, instead of nature.

nette onclaud

Date: 5/14/2012 2:10:00 AM

you grabbed me from first to last lines, ruben.. . such wonderful poetic diction and imagery.. this gotta win!..:) huggs!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/14/2012 12:10:00 AM

You never fail to amaze me with your beautiful poetry.You have a way with tanka Ruben,always did... You got my number one vote... beautiful and going tmfvs!Charma

John Rhinem

Date: 5/13/2012 11:23:00 PM

Smile ˜ Hello, My Dear Precious & Beautiful Friend, Ruben * I Have Always Loved Both The Uniqueness & Profoundness Of Your Wonderful. Poetry ˜ I Find The Bright Colours In Beauty Permeating This Priceless Canvas; 'You Are Amazing & May Yesteryears Ice Melt From Their Smiling Eyes * My Love, Forever;'" John!:) ˜

Date: 5/13/2012 11:31:00 PM

* . . "SMILE * OWWW & YESSS * 'A TREASURE IN BEAUTIES FAVES.'" . . *

Date: 5/13/2012 11:27:00 PM

...."Something Deeply Beautiful, About 'This Rarest In Masterpiece.'" *

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 5/13/2012 6:18:00 PM

Beautiful Tanka, Ruben, Wish you goodluck, :) Jag

Gail Angel Doyle

Date: 5/13/2012 5:33:00 PM

Nice one here for Carolyn's contest Ruben. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Gail

kash poet

Date: 5/13/2012 2:21:00 PM

A great tanka by you Ruben!Enjoyed.Best wishes.

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2012 1:53:00 PM

Spring come s l o w l y this year - well written Ruben. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

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