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DRUNKEN THOUGHTS

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Below is the poem entitled DRUNKEN THOUGHTS which was written by poet Elliott Bowe THe DrUnKeN POeT. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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DRUNKEN THOUGHTS

I love you Cinderella look at how you work so hard
I wouldn't give you the glass footwear  but I would surly
give you the world and heaven above I can see you
in the clouds,I will spin you on the clouds until rose 
peddles rain off of your pink beauteous immaculate 
dress as I bless you with the best you have been 

taken out of me you are my rib we are one soul mates
breathing in heaven adam and eve for you I wear my 
heart on the sleeve of my soul together we are whole
storys of bliss untold the times you let me unfurl  in you
like love notes burnt in sensual Erotic ecstasy  In your 
castle you lay next to me in dream lands of ecstasy while

your supple skin caresses the sensitive parts of me in
streams of heavenly fluff as you blush I gently defeat your queen
and diamond with a hand of king and  ace as I move fast 
paste  through your moist inner embrace face to face gazing
into bond fires of fire works

Honey you are my  Cinderella......

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  1. Date: 5/16/2012 7:57:00 PM
    This is beautiful Elliott.. you painted a beautiful picture with words.. i love it... smiles... chiquita

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 11:43:00 AM
    I THINK EVERY WOMAN WOULD LOVE TO HAVE A MAN LIKE YOU TO WRITE HER POEM AS YOU DO,THANK YOU ELLIOTT,IVY

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 3:44:00 AM
    love the imagery Elliot, the theme, and the flow, in fact an excellent poem, really enjoyed this read. harry