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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 1:17:00 PM

    know im a little late on the game....fantastic up on the ani, and both gods stand up I love it....... xx big fam

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 12:07:00 PM

    This is an astonishing read, I'm very impressed! You did an amazing job writing this, it kept me entertained the whole way thru!

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 3:52:00 PM

    Scribe, congrats on your win, excellent piece...David

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:52:00 PM

    Oh phuc, I shouldn't ever have brought up 77th Division....can't wash schnazz like that off; it settles like a boy-in-blue stain lol. :D~ Bring on the Battle! It's so quiet over there.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:25:00 PM

    Doc, I didn't want to break the poems down into numbers....felt kinda rude. Domn't hate me too long lol. All of the poems that made it into the final round, stand on their own. Thank you for supporting my contest!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:26:00 PM

    oh, yes, I think I was the first one ever to comment on this awesome poem. Congrats in Chris' contest.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:37:00 PM

    This went straight up the walls of my rambling place, Marlon! You inspire me :) Big congrats!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:08:00 PM

    No surprise in seeing this one on the list, awesome write Marlon, super congratulations on your win in the contest :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win! YOUR A CLASS A + POET BRO!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:59:00 AM

    Hi Marlon, you definitely have this rhythm about your poems that makes it so wonderful to read--even if I don't play poker, I enjoyed reading the play by play here and what makes this even better is how you crafted this with deeper meanings. Super congrats on your win :D!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:57:00 AM

    Wow! I thought I had read this one early on, but you must have continued working on it a bit. This is Fantasic! I'm putting it into my favs! Congratulations on your win in Chris' contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 6:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Chris' "A.gain" contest Scribe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:09:00 PM

    Wow, man youi are very good. Good job poet

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  1. Date: 5/29/2012 9:17:00 PM

    what a wonderful poem full of imagery and I don't think I could have penned it any better!

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  1. Date: 5/19/2012 3:28:00 AM

    Dear Marlon Linton,A BIG fantastic WOW for a profound and ingenious,philosophical POEM, Metaphysically the El-Ohim (Gods) must surely be smiling down upon YOU for your in-sighted wisdom, Go well young "Hu-Man"(Mighty Man).

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  1. Date: 5/18/2012 5:34:00 AM

    This is a fantastic write and I loved it Marlon! You are very imaginative. Makes me want to play poker - or am I already playing! ...Samia

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  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:17:00 PM

    XD this poem makes me wanna play some poker for money ch-ching! :) Great job! Descriptions are genious. Just had to point that out! ;) DWB

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  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:17:00 PM

    XD this poem makes me wanna play some poker for money ch-ching! :) Great job! Descriptions are genious. Just had to point that out! ;) DWB ~Yah deserve a 7!~

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:17:00 PM

    ~Yah deserve a 7!~

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    im honored...thanks
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 2:44:00 AM

    Thanks for your comment on my recent verses. This poem is most interesting. For some reason this poem chills me. Thanks for posting it.

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 3:33:00 PM

    A most intriguing piece, my friend! Excellent cadence and clever rhyming and off-rhyming. Your imagery and language are outstanding! Best wishes, Keith

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    Thanks, I read tours and know I have work to do. Intricate wording flows through your pen.
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:55:00 AM

    Ummm! Perhaps there is hope for me. Think I'll let go of the wild cards and play the stright path. Good piece. Grace; Mercy and Peace. Dr. "G"

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    Thanks, the wage was Adam and Eve. Free will of man!
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:53:00 AM

    nice work bro...love he creativity behind this work

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  1. Date: 5/13/2012 9:03:00 PM

    Loving the description! Bravo Marlon! An amazing write

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    Thanks, Jessica.
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 5:59:00 PM

    Interesting work..Not sure of the interpertation though..Yes, God turns a blind eye to all our sins if we are under the shed blood of Jesus..Enjoyed reading ..Sara

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    Thanks, Satan can't win. But he did, through free will. Adam & eve was a gamble! In the end Beelzebub looses, but he can win souls!
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 5:53:00 PM

    An interesting idea Scribe, using a card game as a prop for your poem, enjoyed, Agape, Moses

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  1. Date: 5/13/2012 2:33:00 PM

    very intricate vision depicted, worth untangling a few times. Divine poker and free wills creation...i like how each short phrase contains its own thought

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    Truly appreciative..thanks
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 8:24:00 AM

    Interesting how you've disrobed the darkness using imagery of light. Very nice. hugs, Catie :)

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  1. Date: 5/13/2012 7:42:00 AM

    you score big-time points on such a creative take about light and dark, marlon... fantastic read! :) huggs!

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  1. Date: 5/13/2012 7:32:00 AM

    clever and thought provoking write, my friend

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