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The sensual curves of space and time

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The sensual curves of space and time

Forget progress stampede spelled in linear time
Money blues will destroy your very climb
Instead, see life as a squirrel hopping
Brazenly from branch to twig
or a troop of lions meditating
in the lush jungle heat
We are animals as well
Despite society's dizzy spell
Our heart churn
With the sun and gravity
All the same
Not as lost children
But now adults we can reclaim
The power and mystery of life
Indulging in the wandering curves
Poised between November rain
Awaken body, mind, heart, and nature as well
We need every piece
In the grand composition
As we reach through the looking glass
Into our chosen future

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  1. Date: 5/12/2012 9:01:00 PM

    With G' n ' R thrown in too this fine piece, desires a Rock to be allowed to be seen, heard and proud. So well written is this piece :) have a good weekend :)

    Debrosse Avatar Justin Debrosse Date: 5/12/2012 9:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nice, thanks a lot
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 10:49:00 AM

    Oh, how right you are with every word. We really do need to link ourselves to the world outside of our windows, especially to the beauty of God's world - the landscapes, the birds and animals. We need to sometimes move away from our humanness and realize that we are but part of this world and a small but important part of the universe. Your last verse: "Awaken body, mind, heart" - yes. I think that poets do often bridge the gap between the natural world and the world of man with their words. Look at my poem following yours. Lovely poem and well worth reading!!

    Debrosse Avatar Justin Debrosse Date: 5/12/2012 10:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thankyou for the insight glad you got something from reading it