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Adrift

You are adrift
In my ocean thoughts
Your mouth is a current
I am swept under

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  1. Date: 3/28/2013 12:38:00 PM

    This one is stunning! "In my ocean thoughts" - I love that. I'm adding this little beauty to my faves.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:29:00 PM

    this is good sensuality. I love a short poem like this one. Great to see your very first post here.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 1:46:00 PM

    This is cool...

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 1:27:00 PM

    Jeremy, I Loved this poem. Keep up the good work.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 6:31:00 AM

    lovely done......nice write...........

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 9:48:00 PM

    JEARMY ,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great night ;-) always ~PD ***

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 1:55:00 PM

    nicely done

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 10:00:00 AM

    you know, I can tell you are a great thinker by the depth of your very profoundness in such short and simple word usage. Very exceelnt poetry here! Cindy Lu

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:59:00 AM

    you know, I can tell you are a great thinker by the depth of your very profoundness in such short and simple word usage. Very exceelnt poetry here! Cindy Lu

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 2:44:00 AM

    Very nice... Terry