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Finished

crushed hopes

bitter defeat

flattened ant

disillusionment

all is lost

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  1. Date: 5/18/2012 5:06:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Robin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:39:00 PM

    Welcome to the Soup!

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:38:00 PM

    Again, your language, and the imagery you have created are fantastic! AGAIN, well done!! Keith

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/15/2012 4:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for your kind words, Keith. robinwrennfiore
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:14:00 AM

    it was nice stopping by to read you poem today.....keep the good work up..and welcome to poetry soup

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/14/2012 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you, prince.
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 4:20:00 AM

    Thank you very much

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 12:00:00 PM

    Welcome. Hope you enjoy PS. Keep up the good work.

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 1:40:00 AM

    YOU SHATTERED THE ILLUSION ... CUTE , I like it ;)

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/13/2012 5:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks!
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 11:57:00 AM

    steam iron hope,all is not lost,have faith,LOL,I love this poem

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/12/2012 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    not as much as I loved your poem. Excellent!
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 9:19:00 PM

    Poor ant!! Yes, you described the title very well, Robin!

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/12/2012 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you very much for commenting. I think that we have all been that "ant."
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 5:33:00 PM

    17 syllables- indeed... form?

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/13/2012 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That would explain my acerbic wit, ha!...thanks for the chuckle
    Green Avatar Amy Green
    Date: 5/12/2012 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "MINE", she says- now THAT is the 1 word I love coming from someone- GREAT... that is saying, "Don't question me"! U got all my respect!
    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/11/2012 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    mine
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 4:02:00 PM

    Thought provoking...good write.

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/11/2012 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    many thanks