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Mortality

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Mortality

the ocean existed before me

the waves do not cease

in my wake

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  1. Date: 5/18/2012 9:24:00 PM
    Brilliant Haiku Robin!! I love its depth and introspection!! Well Done my friend! big hugs, love ya deb

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/19/2012 3:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, Deb, for the very nice compliments...love ya back! robinwrennfiore
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:30:00 PM
    What a marvelous HAIKU! It really puts things in perspective, Robin. BRAVO!! Best wishes, Keith

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/15/2012 4:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Keith, you are too kind. thank you, sincerely. robinwrennfiore
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 1:51:00 PM
    You weren't pondered, you were drank in with this poem.

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/12/2012 4:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow. How incredibly gracious of you. Your comment was fabulous. Your talent shows.
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 5:57:00 AM
    nicely done Robin..

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/12/2012 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you very much, Joseph.
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 5:38:00 PM
    Nice imagery. Flows well

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore
    Date: 5/11/2012 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you, I'm happy to have been pondered.