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Sleeping Beauty

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Sleeping Beauty

Laughing amid the joyful morn as dashing through this sunlit meadow; sprites

Colouring in smiles whileas nature gazes and angels point, unto a clearing....

Rising columns aneath glittering light; etching castles beyound golden hues

White doves gliding through waterfalls with silver scrolls; painting fairy tales

Scenes parting their streams to weave these dreams; echoing moonbeams

Giggling and there you are, chasing time which waves goodbye; blue skies 

About the glass with loves hands turning pages, inside this clock; ageless....

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...."'Sleeping Beauty's,` Prince of Rhymes" ~

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  1. Date: 8/9/2013 9:39:00 PM

    Wonderful free flowing adventures piece loving it! Laura :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:57:00 PM

    Very Lovely. Nicely written as always. Take good care and God bless. Not around the soup much, I gave up on it. My poetry is in magazines every month. :) I think of you sometimes, wish we could have been more cordial towards the end of my time at the poetry soup, again, take care and God bless, much love, Cindy

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 9:09:00 PM

    love this poem i am very much in to fairy tails ... i feel like im in one myself hehehe : D LUV~Sammie~

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 4:58:00 PM

    lovely x

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:05:00 AM

    Sounds like where I want to be; could do with some magic in my life and you're the one who gave it! Luv, Lizabeth

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 9:56:00 AM

    oh, what a lovely write...I saw me there...lol...this is a fav dear one...thank you for sharing...how wonderfully gifted you are...big hugs, love ya , deb....Well Done!! :)

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:51:00 AM

    keep the good work up..enjoyed reading this

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:52:00 AM

    faries are better than bunnies.. infact nothing is more beautiful then pink winged faries in dreams......

     Avatar Date: 5/14/2012 1:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."No, 'You Are.'" *
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:14:00 AM

    jOhn re your comment .. i like the word faries better than spirits.. its lovely as it is.. Have a wonderful evening dear friend. :)

     Avatar Date: 5/14/2012 12:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."What About Bunnies Baby?" *
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 3:11:00 PM

    Chasing time..Interesting phrase...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by Summer's Perfume..It was about what my favorite aunt said to me once when I was a young girl..Sara

     Avatar Date: 5/13/2012 6:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."Yessss, Your Beauty Tis Still, 'The Sweeetest Of Perfume.'" *
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 12:26:00 PM

    Beautiful expression and imagery John! I have been transported to your fairy tale, and yes, I am smiling. God bless you and thanks for visiting my poems this week. I appreciate your kindness always. Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:52:00 AM

    Excellent poem of sleeping beauty, starts from laughing and ends to ageless...., loved always my friend, bl

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 12:53:00 PM

    Bravo...brilliant piece...luv shannon

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 11:24:00 PM

    I think i remember this beauty..Just another enchanting story from your outstanding pen... going to my favs.........Charma

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 9:44:00 PM

    beautiful!

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 8:15:00 PM

    Love it..simply love your work of art!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 4:19:00 PM

    A very good visual expression. Magical!

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 3:12:00 PM

    Beautiful images portrayed enjoyed your verse hugs vie

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 1:09:00 PM

    Your poetry is so lively and beautiful. The imagery I get from the words is spectacular. Splendid write! Always, Laura