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The Breakup

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The Breakup

You detached me from your regard.

You devalued me with your unkindness.

Your unapologetic apathy underscored my uselessness.

But, when you told me to get out, you were redundant.

I was already gone.

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  1. Date: 5/24/2012 12:44:00 PM

    Hi Robin welcome to the soup, very good write short and to the point, have a good weekend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 3:38:00 PM

    Ha ha! Good for you! (if this is actually factual.) If not, it's still a great piece. Great language, Robin. Best wishes, Keith

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore Date: 5/14/2012 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aren't all good poems factual (unfortunately or fortunately for us)? Thank you for your kind words. Best wishes to you as well! Robinwrennfiore
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 11:17:00 AM

    I like your style, its so short yet so loaded. Good work!

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore Date: 5/14/2012 1:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much.
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 11:49:00 AM

    straight to the point,nice

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore Date: 5/12/2012 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I have a penchant to be wordy...concise was my goal.
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 1:43:00 PM

    I enjoyed this poem you wrote here Robin....INK-U-SCRIPT

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore Date: 5/11/2012 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 10:21:00 AM

    and a big welcome to the soup..David

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 10:20:00 AM

    Robin oh very well written..David

    wrenn-fiore Avatar robin wrenn-fiore Date: 5/11/2012 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    many thanks