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Tender Trail at Twilight

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Tender Trail at Twilight

Twin sweethearts melted into 
one, as soft skins swirled,
The Stars sparkled while our 
sensual senses soared to the 
skies. 
Drenched, we drowned in  the 
depth of a delightful dream,
dancing to a duel duet -- the 
drums of doped desire at dusk.

We wielded wetness from the 
womb of wildest wishes;
walking in the worlds of 
wonders, wooing warmth;
only to resume to the 
realms of reality... raindrops of 
romance,
we relished the rarest rays of 
the twilight's
radiance.

Filled with the freshest of feeling 
under the fountain of fire,
nursing a nude nature; nuturing 
a nifty need at night...
till a yellow moon in a 
white morn mutters melodious 
music
to two sensual souls 
soaked in a speechless sensation.

We swam in the stream of 
serenity
O, what a magnetic moonlight 
on a sweet night!

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  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:53:00 AM
    Ilkie you use of alliteration and metaphor. great write.

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 2:58:00 PM
    Very good written Adeleke! - Were are you....your new mom looking for you. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 6:49:00 PM
    THIS IS SHEER BRILLIANCE!

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 11:30:00 AM
    Very good Alliteration poem by you Adeleke.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 9:48:00 AM
    Adeleke I lik ethe poem and good use of aliteration..David