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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 5/19/2012 9:31:00 PM
    You can still edit the last line here and update it if you want...its up to you..beautiful poem though.

    Paxman Avatar Arnisha Paxman
    Date: 5/20/2012 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) still thinking about it...
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 5:35:00 PM
    Now this is a good Haiku! Nice one.

    Paxman Avatar Arnisha Paxman
    Date: 5/12/2012 5:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! :) I thought something else might ruin the last line
    Green Avatar Amy Green
    Date: 5/11/2012 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    1 syllable short in the last line- but who cares, works wonderfully together