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My thoughts, On thoughts

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My thoughts, On thoughts

My intentions are never to misguide you, nor to judge you.. My ambition is clearly to enlighten you, brighten you, hold the stars so close that it feels like they can ignite you...Spontaneous, never erroneous, like 4 leaf clover with a hint of some fairy dust....it surely must not be enough, because you stand as if empowerment was man? your eyes lack sincerity that can be scattered among the land, just so that it could be proven, but what is life breathing having anything to do with, your character, your inherited nature, your mind of a million thoughts untamed and ungrateful? bastards or his children, we all are forgiven. life is not a game there is a reason that its given. though you blind creatures can be easily deceived and tossed to the wolves where not a seed is less treated.. Equality is universal: not spiritual nor commercial, facts are like blood, once it leaves you it hurts you.. The soul is beyond minds read, we cannot fathom nor conceive. but our virtues are still, so for this time we shall believe.

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  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:16:00 AM

    it was nice stopping by to read you poem today.....keep the good work up..and welcome to poetry soup

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 4:46:00 AM

    good write. eye opening.

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 10:30:00 AM

    Marc, I like it.David

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 5:00:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Marc. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol