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Karma

Yesterday, I followed her true invisible form
Colors turning a kaleidoscopic, keeping feeling deep and warm

A state of mind, that makes reality feel alive
Stabbing moments that teach how tough it is to survive
And still this dagger is penetrating into my back real slow
Sweeping away the grimace under the rug in a one woman show 

Illusive dreams asking for more and more
Sinking with doom, as karma sways through heaven's door
There she keeps her walk on stilts avoiding kismet
Removing every single footprint before sunset

Spending eternity planning the bliss we cannot see
Quenching my confidence, with moisture that pleasures me
Arching a dirty deed, aiming all fingers that point at me
Spreading her demonic ecstasy, a mass of light weight, we can't see

A giggle-some laugh I cannot hear
Tainted, in a nefarious way as the night disappears
Delighted she glistens through the celestial world alone
A whisper of love with an impossible auspicious tone

Epic and exquisite, she works incognito striking whomever she wants
She Is The Enigma!" She Is the Illness~ that forever haunts
A mysterious lady who's perception flows with her own timeless oasis
An Empress working on her own simplicity basis

My body impervious to react on conflicts that dwell with deep desire
Aggressively my defiant ways will allow her excessive universe to transpire
Like a lily we give in to the beauty of her empress exploding ravenous lust
It's magical and feeds off of the revenge that deepens with thrust

Down in the lilac valley, storming down like a glacier leaving nothing below
We caress we emerge, than we dust off the repellent of her forsaken glow
Leaving us with wounds, when our conflicts ricochet
Impacting us with a rebound when everything bounces back our way

She Springs in like a breeze that dwells and leaves gallivant
Shadows, from the past swing back with a darken chant
Leaving nothing but a Chinese Aster garden trace
Her crown, sheer vixen and vigor with Victoria's fantastical lace

Her candle desalinate effect with a gently glow
Everything to her is an issue with results that come and go
Karma's punishments sails real slow, against the wind, waged by the zephyr
Rebuilding from the aftermath of, Karma's payback splenetic weather

Close your eyes and feel the consequences we breathe in
Secretly every wage comes with reward from our hubris sin
A grasp with no escapes from the repercussion and deeds in our hearts
Doors spillover, in a significant unexplained phenomenal start

by;pd

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  1. Date: 2/10/2013 8:03:00 AM

    Whew!!! wow!! superb write, excellent poet ever...I enjoyed reading it before I go to sleep...two thumbs up to you my dear PD...thanks for being an inspiration. Hugs, Maria :)

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 2:06:00 AM

    Another great one! That was an intense read. I really enjoy your excellent vocabulary in your writing, PD. Keep it going!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 9:24:00 PM

    You are a one women show! Another amazing write. Good job Linda.

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 6:43:00 PM

    wonderful poem ,it's sooooooooo touching ,enjoyed reading it thank you hugs

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:44:00 AM

    I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today P.D.... I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 9:28:00 PM

    This is another superb poems of yours, PD. I love it so much and so touching. Excellent write by a great poem my dear friend! Thanks for sharing. hugs-leonora

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 5:46:00 AM

    WOW xx

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 3:02:00 PM

    Geez you have at least 3 great verses rolled into one! Loved the vocab and the learned refferances. fav verse [Down in the lilac valley, storming down like a glacier leaving nothing below/We caress we emerge, than we dust off the repellent of her forsaken glow/Leaving us with wounds, when our conflicts ricochet/Impacting us with a rebound when everything bounces back our way]Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 11:40:00 PM

    Marvelous-enchanting-terrifying- an extraordinary use of language-truly masterful in tempo & tone,in message -PD.,this composition should merit some fine karma for you;for even Karma has ego and desires praise - only the masters of the craft can manipulate the language as successfully as you do -"as karma sways through heaven's door..." the second verse is my favorite;the last so tutorial-with respect,my Sister of the Quill-J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 9:41:00 AM

    Thankyou for your kind comments I like this poenm alot your words seem to flow I like the way you capture the essenc CAN YOU PLEASE TELL ME HOW TO SOUP BX YOU ABOUT CONTEST I SEND POEM VISULISATION TO YOUR CONTEST FORGOT TO PUT NAME AT BOTTOM ECT CAN YOU LET ME KNOW THANKS IT WOULD BE NICE ALSO TO GET MORE INSIGHT INTO YOUR CREATIVITY X ALWYS DAVID SCOTT

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 6:11:00 PM

    Hi PD - I enjoyed reading your unique poem about karma. You have a definite talent of expressing deep thoughts in a very creative way. Thank you for your support regarding my poems! - Gail

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 5:44:00 PM

    Great write to epitomise the essence of karma.

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 9:32:00 AM

    Speaking of karma. Its better when it happens instantly because the longer it takes the bigger impact it will have. LOL :0

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 5:12:00 PM

    I dont think ive ever read a poets work which is more diverse and so comfortably elegant as yours.... you take the reader on a real ride of the imagination and lead them anywhere and its all so beautiful... bravo dear lady... karen

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:04:00 PM

    oh well done on the karma! brilliantly penned and deep of thoughts, a pleasure to read.

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 3:16:00 AM

    you expressed it so well, PD.. the law of consequence reaps what one sows.. a defining poem which seeks to embrace fairness in a world filled with injustice of all kinds... thanks for stopping by; so appreciated!.. have a swell day!..:) huggs to you!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 5:43:00 AM

    Nice poem poetic i could do with some good karma now xdavidscott

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 10:10:00 PM

    wow PD you take my breath away each time I read your work!

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 8:32:00 PM

    " This Is Real Epic, loved the way you talked 'Bout Me! CARMA" LMAOF..

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 7:58:00 AM

    Such a great poem and display of beautiful word flow, almost lyric like.

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 11:56:00 PM

    Beautifully penned on Karma,PD.It brings a lot of thoughts to my mind...........

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 6:38:00 PM

    You're so good :o

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 7:14:00 PM

    You are an amazing poet, PD...as a line above states, doors spillover, with unexplained phenomenal (art)...... Must be amazing karma you've created! :)

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 4:37:00 PM

    weeee! Congrats to me... hugging myself... thank you JOYCE!!!

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 12:27:00 PM

    WOW! THATS ALL I CAN SAY!!!!!!!!!!!......~sashi

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 7:00:00 AM

    congrats on your win PD..

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 6:54:00 AM

    a stellar write PD.. .. deep...loved it.. thanks for stopping by ...always..Joseph

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 3:02:00 AM

    karma waits in covered doors, ironic, slaps me to the floor, though innocent i insist, black arrows never missed, i am guilty ...yes 4 sure, aint just my kind of bliss.... great poetry p. d. babe....

    JOHNSON Avatar DON JOHNSON Date: 7/30/2012 12:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you p.d. love your style, turning words, all the while, sidestep the karmic kiss, sidestep 4 sweetest bliss, or stay n do your time, 4 some belated crime, though knowledge dont exist???
  1. Date: 5/19/2012 9:06:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, PD. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 6:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Joyce's "Rhyming Game" contest P.D. I think this shall go to my favs today. That Karma is a wild one now isn't she. Love, Carol (Tickle Tickle)

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