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About This Poem

Sinful Bleed-ing DISORDER







                                                   Sinful
                                            minds bleeding-
                                             profusely. Seek
                                          a hysteroscope from
                                                   Above.




Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

0510-2012

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  1. Wright Avatar
    Doreen Wright
    Date: 8/5/2012 8:54:00 PM
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    Minds bleeding profusely? Wow! So much said in so few words. Powerful!!
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    Bertha Davis
    Date: 7/26/2012 9:57:00 AM
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    Thanks for sharing and encouraging
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    Carma Reed
    Date: 6/1/2012 11:29:00 PM
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    So very true This one is. ;B

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes maam indeed it is!!
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    peggy caulfield
    Date: 5/24/2012 6:54:00 AM
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    This one is interesting - a hysteroscope from above. You are passing some good ideas on.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/24/2012 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol..I tried to be a bit different!!! All smiles
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 5/15/2012 9:35:00 PM
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    oh this is cool today. How did I miss it before?

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/15/2012 10:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol...I'm not even sure!! Hugs
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 5/15/2012 8:25:00 PM
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    Excellent! I think that this form (its format) is perfect for this verse. Clever capitalized "Above." Ruben.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/15/2012 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a million!!!
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 5/15/2012 8:25:00 PM
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    Excellent! I think that this form (its format) is perfect for this verse. Clever capitalized "Above." Ruben.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/15/2012 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Smiles..Thank you again!!!
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    joi murphy
    Date: 5/15/2012 6:18:00 PM
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    guidance!!!!!! I like it

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/15/2012 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 5/12/2012 8:51:00 AM
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    Interesting way of putting the idea..Yes, when one is encrusted with sin that one needs to meet the Savior..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/12/2012 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you and you are so very welcome madam!!
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    Cindy Lu
    Date: 5/12/2012 7:27:00 AM
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    You have done so well here! I remember the first poetry I read of yours, a definite favorite. Rock on with you bad arse pen! Cindy Lu AKA Lucinda

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/12/2012 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks you sooo much!!!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 5/12/2012 5:56:00 AM
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    New man in P-Soup - Tell him that I like this haiku, and he is welcome to read some of mine poem Pace,G - Love Anne-Lise :)+ :=)

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/12/2012 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol..ok I will...Thanks Anne!!
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 5/12/2012 5:47:00 AM
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    Very nice G... such wisdom in your words. very enjoyed.... Michael

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/12/2012 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sir!!!
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    John Rhinem
    Date: 5/12/2012 12:32:00 AM
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    Smile ˜ Quite Compelling & Yet Injected With A Bit Of Humour Also, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful GPac * Made Me Think Of Jack Nicholson In One Flew Over The Cookoos Nest ˜ Also, Thank You For The Kind Visit; Very Lovely ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/12/2012 2:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Simply love your comments John!!! Smiles
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    Joseph May
    Date: 5/11/2012 11:20:00 AM
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    ouch...nicely done G...

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/11/2012 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joseph!!
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    Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/10/2012 2:55:00 PM
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    Bravo! It isn't a tournequet that's needed to stop it...no quick fix...complete removal of the problem!! And by the only one who can fix it! Well Done!! Pace! Well Done...big hugs, love ya deb

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/11/2012 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Smiles..Thank you Deborah!
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 5/10/2012 11:39:00 AM
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    I can go to different places with this one..."Him" as GOD or "him" as a male chauvinist? : ) I like both ending! Good one, INK! Ruben.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/10/2012 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for sharing..I would go with your first one..smiles
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    kash poet
    Date: 5/10/2012 10:59:00 AM
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    Good one Pace,enjoyed.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/10/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Kash!!!
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    David Williams
    Date: 5/10/2012 10:22:00 AM
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    Pace I like it ..David

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/10/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David!!
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    SCRIBE ML
    Date: 5/10/2012 9:56:00 AM
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    Genius, and big dog status....good one familia!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/10/2012 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Scribe!!