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Sinful Bleed-ing DISORDER

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Sinful Bleed-ing DISORDER







                                                   Sinful
                                            minds bleeding-
                                             profusely. Seek
                                          a hysteroscope from
                                                   Above.




Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

0510-2012

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  1. Date: 8/21/2013 2:22:00 PM
    I've said it before, and I'll say it again: I love love love brevity and how so much can be said with so few words. I am unaccustomed to this style, but I like it. Very interesting. Thanks for a great read! :)

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:54:00 PM
    Minds bleeding profusely? Wow! So much said in so few words. Powerful!!

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 9:57:00 AM
    Thanks for sharing and encouraging

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 11:29:00 PM
    So very true This one is. ;B

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    Date: 6/2/2012 12:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes maam indeed it is!!
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 6:54:00 AM
    This one is interesting - a hysteroscope from above. You are passing some good ideas on.

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    Date: 5/24/2012 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..I tried to be a bit different!!! All smiles
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:35:00 PM
    oh this is cool today. How did I miss it before?

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    Date: 5/15/2012 10:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol...I'm not even sure!! Hugs
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 8:25:00 PM
    Excellent! I think that this form (its format) is perfect for this verse. Clever capitalized "Above." Ruben.

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    Date: 5/15/2012 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a million!!!
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 8:25:00 PM
    Excellent! I think that this form (its format) is perfect for this verse. Clever capitalized "Above." Ruben.

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    Date: 5/15/2012 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Smiles..Thank you again!!!
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 6:18:00 PM
    guidance!!!!!! I like it

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    Date: 5/15/2012 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 8:51:00 AM
    Interesting way of putting the idea..Yes, when one is encrusted with sin that one needs to meet the Savior..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

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    Date: 5/12/2012 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you and you are so very welcome madam!!
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 7:27:00 AM
    You have done so well here! I remember the first poetry I read of yours, a definite favorite. Rock on with you bad arse pen! Cindy Lu AKA Lucinda

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    Date: 5/12/2012 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks you sooo much!!!
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 5:56:00 AM
    New man in P-Soup - Tell him that I like this haiku, and he is welcome to read some of mine poem Pace,G - Love Anne-Lise :)+ :=)

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    Date: 5/12/2012 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..ok I will...Thanks Anne!!
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 5:47:00 AM
    Very nice G... such wisdom in your words. very enjoyed.... Michael

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    Date: 5/12/2012 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sir!!!
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 12:32:00 AM
    Smile ˜ Quite Compelling & Yet Injected With A Bit Of Humour Also, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful GPac * Made Me Think Of Jack Nicholson In One Flew Over The Cookoos Nest ˜ Also, Thank You For The Kind Visit; Very Lovely ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

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    Date: 5/12/2012 2:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Simply love your comments John!!! Smiles
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 11:20:00 AM
    ouch...nicely done G...

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    Date: 5/11/2012 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph!!
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 2:55:00 PM
    Bravo! It isn't a tournequet that's needed to stop it...no quick fix...complete removal of the problem!! And by the only one who can fix it! Well Done!! Pace! Well Done...big hugs, love ya deb

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    Date: 5/11/2012 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Smiles..Thank you Deborah!
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 11:39:00 AM
    I can go to different places with this one..."Him" as GOD or "him" as a male chauvinist? : ) I like both ending! Good one, INK! Ruben.

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    Date: 5/10/2012 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for sharing..I would go with your first one..smiles
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 10:59:00 AM
    Good one Pace,enjoyed.

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    Date: 5/10/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kash!!!
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 10:22:00 AM
    Pace I like it ..David

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    Date: 5/10/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David!!
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 9:56:00 AM
    Genius, and big dog status....good one familia!

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    Date: 5/10/2012 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Scribe!!