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Human

A game of conflict played on earth
Id battles Ego to find mirth
Will a soul be won or lost?

Life's conflict poisoned to it's end
Can't find joy, always on the mend
God holds your soul at all cost.





5-10-2012   "Tail-Rhyme"

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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 1:17:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading the tale and its endiing here Tom, Also see you've bagged a win with it..! (well done)

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 2:06:00 PM

    A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Tom. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 12:54:00 PM

    That Id and Ego brings me grief some days or maybe most days..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 9:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on the winners' circle, Tom.

    Larrow Avatar Tom Larrow Date: 5/14/2012 9:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I truly enjoyed reading "A State of Mind" it's all in your perception! Congrats on your excellent poem and well deserved win.
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:37:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Tom. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 3:55:00 PM

    And he holds it safely always, if we let Him. Enjoyed !! Congrats on your winning placement in the contest !!

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 11:57:00 AM

    Congrats Tom on your win.Very good Tail Rhyme.

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 11:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Tom!! huggs, deb

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 11:32:00 AM

    Tom , congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 7:21:00 PM

    Tom, enjoyed stopping by..pd

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 2:49:00 PM

    Well done rhyme Tom, and good words.- oxox hug Anne-Lise